Another great installment in this series but if the end of the story is true, then this series has sadly come to an end with Jack. Excellent use of words to describe your interlude. Two unselfish lovers who want nothing more than to please each other rather than be the center of attention. Very sensual and loving. Looking foward to see if Melanie explores her desire for women in future stories...
This story is based on Melanie's real life experience. The ending came as a surprise to her too!
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Anonymous10/27/15
Great story - Great descriptions!
Wow! I loved your descriptions of their love making. You developed the scene perfectly. I would love to share a story with you if you email me at florida_beaches@aol.com Thanks for sharing!
Well the story is quite gripping and encouraging. Going through the storyline feels Jack did not accept the fantasy of Melanie. Also the story is ended with a very short fall.
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More please!
delightful...please keep going. Great writing, good length of each chapter. Teasing us all for more !
Another winner!
Another great installment in this series but if the end of the story is true, then this series has sadly come to an end with Jack. Excellent use of words to describe your interlude. Two unselfish lovers who want nothing more than to please each other rather than be the center of attention. Very sensual and loving. Looking foward to see if Melanie explores her desire for women in future stories...
excellent story, very good writing, but surprised at the sudden ending. was looking forward to more installments.
Abrupt ending
This story is based on Melanie's real life experience. The ending came as a surprise to her too!
Great story - Great descriptions!
Wow! I loved your descriptions of their love making. You developed the scene perfectly. I would love to share a story with you if you email me at florida_beaches@aol.com Thanks for sharing!
Passion/Lust.
Well the story is quite gripping and encouraging. Going through the storyline feels Jack did not accept the fantasy of Melanie. Also the story is ended with a very short fall.
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