There were so many errors that I stopped reading by the third paragraph. An editor or proof reader would help resolve this distraction, allowing the reader to focus on your interesting story line. Nice ideas!
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It has promise, I think...
There were so many errors that I stopped reading by the third paragraph. An editor or proof reader would help resolve this distraction, allowing the reader to focus on your interesting story line. Nice ideas!
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