He is just so much fluff, takes care of the bills, and well whatever he does. Like she cares what Mike does or not. Off she goes to become sids custom slut. Of course the problem will be sluts are expendable. Mike if he has any balls will kick her out. sid is old and will leave everything to his kids. Poor little slut will be left hooking for money. But most likely she die an early death, hopefully alone and in pain.
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Anonymous11/02/14
So the husband doesn't actually have anything to do with the story? Just filler material for people to do depraved shit and create tension?
That makes perfect sense now. Husband is there just for filler, and as a "lighting rod' now it makes more sense, thank you! OK now it is just a stupid story.
As usual, the anonymous commenters make sad remarks.
Really why do they read Literotica stories when they know in advance what the subject matter is.
I like these tales an look forward to further chapters.
The premiss of the theme is quite believable, but please keep it that way and do not go to far into silly and then unbelievable teritory.
I think the husband is happy to get rid of her, so he can have hos own life...This story would be a lot better if she wasn't married and lived with her aunt...
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Anonymous11/04/14
Wanting more
I think it's great and hope you continue more. There are beautiful ladies out there that love to show off. I know my wife is one.
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Anonymous11/04/14
Cannot wait for the next chapter
For sure , one of the most promising writers on Literotica , all your stories are great but this shows huge promise
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Anonymous11/14/14
whens the next one due on here?
good so far - have enjoyed look forward to the next installment due
So she really does not care about Mike?
He is just so much fluff, takes care of the bills, and well whatever he does. Like she cares what Mike does or not. Off she goes to become sids custom slut. Of course the problem will be sluts are expendable. Mike if he has any balls will kick her out. sid is old and will leave everything to his kids. Poor little slut will be left hooking for money. But most likely she die an early death, hopefully alone and in pain.
So the husband doesn't actually have anything to do with the story? Just filler material for people to do depraved shit and create tension?
Thanks Annon
That makes perfect sense now. Husband is there just for filler, and as a "lighting rod' now it makes more sense, thank you! OK now it is just a stupid story.
A well written fantasy.
As usual, the anonymous commenters make sad remarks.
Really why do they read Literotica stories when they know in advance what the subject matter is.
I like these tales an look forward to further chapters.
The premiss of the theme is quite believable, but please keep it that way and do not go to far into silly and then unbelievable teritory.
Loved the story
Great story keep it coming, ignore the trolls
Good story
Enjoyed it and can't wait for the next one.
Clever plot
Agree...
I think the husband is happy to get rid of her, so he can have hos own life...This story would be a lot better if she wasn't married and lived with her aunt...
Wanting more
I think it's great and hope you continue more. There are beautiful ladies out there that love to show off. I know my wife is one.
Cannot wait for the next chapter
For sure , one of the most promising writers on Literotica , all your stories are great but this shows huge promise
whens the next one due on here?
good so far - have enjoyed look forward to the next installment due
more please
Really love to have seen this story continue, made me rather moist!
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