"She opened the door and stepped in quietly, closing the door behind her and locking it."
How did the daughter open the door when it was locked as your story said?
Not a bad mistake but many will notice this. Still I like where you're going with it and hope you continue it.
English
She did?
"She opened the door and stepped in quietly, closing the door behind her and locking it."
How did the daughter open the door when it was locked as your story said?
Not a bad mistake but many will notice this. Still I like where you're going with it and hope you continue it.
bastard!
great second chapter but then you leave us hanging, cock in hand, begging for more!
I too double checked the "locked the door" passage, but then just figured Cindy thought she locked it, but didn't turn the lock fully.
now stop reading these comments and get back to writing chapter 3!
Just like 1st chapter
Such a dickhead only thinking with his cock and not the girls
And in English...?
"the rest of the girls lied around..."
Let's try "lay around".
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