but so many questions abound.
We are told that the "memory" is to be selected at random. yet, the one recorded by a male of a very kinky and painful fellatio session is the one chosen. why? since that triggered the events to follow.
who was that male?
for the grand finale, two participants are in a single room, each broadcasting a signal, simultaneously. A large group of individuals, each with a blue tooth enabled receiver, are all in the same room.
how do you designate and differentiate a discrete signal on a common band? in other words, how could you make certain the females received the male broadcast and the males the broadcast from the female?
so much for the technical
our narrator, also unidentified, makes the following statement:
"Because love is indeed a very strange thing.
And it seems to be growing stranger every day...but that's business...isn't it?"
is it? has love become a business? I am guessing we are meant to understand, but I don't. yes, there are florists, wine merchants, restaurants, hotels, spas, jewelers, and many more who profit from those in or wanting to be in love. but "that's business"?
btw, how large is this memory warehouse, and who is the keeper of it's contents?
I get the feeling Adrian you are enjoying playing us all as instruments in your own orchestra, much as would your namesake.
English
Interesting
Glad to read a new story from you. Danger always lurks when technology outpaces human ability to control it, rather than to be controlled by it.
Boyd
fascinating
AL, a skillfully presented, well imagineered story. A little ahead of it's time. Did I just do a pun?
As a society, we do love our pretty, pretty, shiny toys.
a wicked web is indeed woven
but so many questions abound.
We are told that the "memory" is to be selected at random. yet, the one recorded by a male of a very kinky and painful fellatio session is the one chosen. why? since that triggered the events to follow.
who was that male?
for the grand finale, two participants are in a single room, each broadcasting a signal, simultaneously. A large group of individuals, each with a blue tooth enabled receiver, are all in the same room.
how do you designate and differentiate a discrete signal on a common band? in other words, how could you make certain the females received the male broadcast and the males the broadcast from the female?
so much for the technical
our narrator, also unidentified, makes the following statement:
"Because love is indeed a very strange thing.
And it seems to be growing stranger every day...but that's business...isn't it?"
is it? has love become a business? I am guessing we are meant to understand, but I don't. yes, there are florists, wine merchants, restaurants, hotels, spas, jewelers, and many more who profit from those in or wanting to be in love. but "that's business"?
btw, how large is this memory warehouse, and who is the keeper of it's contents?
I get the feeling Adrian you are enjoying playing us all as instruments in your own orchestra, much as would your namesake.
thank you for another thought provoking story.
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