by Bernie54
Wonderful story! Why did you mention Mexican food, though, and not follow up on it?
I must say: That was the best scat story I ever read!!
Please go on with it!!!!!!
Wow I feel this is the best among best. I feel sorry to give other stories 5 stars. I should give this about million stars. I love this story. Keep it up... You have the best talent of writing. Up to now I only red 3 pages and I cum 4 times. I'll save the rest for another day. :* for the story
An excellent story! Very well written.
I can't wait to hear more about the things that Nancy and the sister will do to the hero.
This is one of the best erotic stories I have ever read even without any foot play. Very well written.
This is a one of the best stories I've read. You should really continue it so Vanessa and Nancy xan have their turns ;)
Some take a different road in life - like that kid, Alton Meyer - in the movie, Midnight Special. Mercy, is not about showing forgiveness, but about showing another how to stop sinning, or hurting - it is about healing. Compassion, in contrast, is about forgiveness - you are weak, so forget about it, and keep moving forward. It is written that the Lord said unto Moses, I will have mercy upon whom I will have mercy, and compassion upon whom I will have compassion. Some are shown early - wrong way stupid. While others learn through experience rather than through examples, such as case studies, thought experiments.. in free democratic societies, Erotica may be found, and without government dictating to persons what they may, or may not, think about. But in communist societies where persons are brought up to believe that they are ok, and do not have a dark side, because the revolution has done away with the capitalist selfish influence "ye are saved!" - well, ever read, Child 44? It is about serial killers and cannibalism and unofficial food shortages .. "war on terror", "homeland security" .. why? What do "they" think is coming? Planet Terror? If oil production had already peaked a decade ago..
This is, hands down, the most enjoyable story I’ve read on this site.
Please consider writing more! Continue the saga!
Love it. Soft bdsm. Just how i love it. Im happy that story was not destroyed with too much people. Happend at the ( dont know why moust of writers love to engage all in one story) end but loved it. Enjoyed reading it
Wow that was really hardcore. It was really depraved. I was very grossed out, but you did give a clear warning about the scat, so no worries. I hope your readers know that scat fantasies are fine, but in real life feces to mouth play is not really safe. A great way to get hepatitis and a lot of other nasty illnesses and infections. Ok enough pontificating, sorry. Peace.
I thought it started out extremely good,but after 2nd chapter got a bit repetitive,but
then again many others are the same..it would be nice if writers could alternate
more as they progress,and take things to next level...for example in this and
others,training someone as a toilet would take much longer than that,unless he
was experienced,and eating from t/bowl would be much more stimulating,also slaves
just wouldn't except it as they do in stories as if eating cake or whatever..so more
thought needs to be expressed in future on stories like this..but overall would
rate it 80%,and as I said first 2 installments I found excellent..I just wish in my
lifetime I had found a woman like that...I have tried believe me.
I want to read about Vanessa and Nancy with Bernie and April. I know the stories will be great. And then to continue with April renting Bernie out. I could see a whole series out of this.
Very well done! I love the kiss hello and the kiss goodbye...awesome ritual. Wonderful tale...
Love the story. Couldn't stop reading. I've been a toilet slave and love being one. I hope you finish his journey. I want to learn how you want it to end. Please finish. Love your story
Hi author, when will you post the next part of APRIL'S PET? Or other stories? It's been 10 years since your final presence at Literotica. Quickly post the stories. I have been waiting this