Lacy's Ironic Twist Ch. 02.1

watch your narrative person

You started in third person, then switched to first person.

Thank you for the note...

I did it on purpose for thus one :) thank you for pointing it out.

Anxious...

For the next chapter...

I really loved ...

... how you had him tie her wrists with a ribbon as a symbol of restraint. It's so much more powerful (and wonderfully humiliating) to willing submit to a man ... and be forced to look into his eyes as he takes you ...

Thank you.

Thank you

Thank you both for your feedback.

This is really really good