All Comments on 'Betweens'

I enjoyed all of it, but the first stanza caught me, set the mood.

Transported me to other places, other times... lovely language, beautiful, sensual, and ultimately visceral imagery. One of the best I've seen on Lit.

-Ayn

Beautiful all the way through with very dense super structure. I have to read it a few times more to get full enjoyment of it.

In the start it gave me a mood similar to Italo Calvino's "Le citta invisibilli". Probably he would have been jealous for not thinking of it.

5ed & recommended!

Thanks for sharing and for your invitation to read, I would have missed it otherwise.

To me it reads like a Travel brochure with perks. A list telling the reader what you did where, like a postcard sent saying 'Wish you were here'.

Beautifully written, Tio :)