You did a good job here, not super hot and sexy, but a deliberately paced story of a mother and son. I wonder if the cabins owner has any desire for a group sex and incest session with his mother and son. I only speculate because there was a lot of hints she offered to direct to her own secrets. Thank you
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Anonymous11/10/14
fun with your son
i got so horny reading your story . boy do i wish i was your son. i read the same kind of stories i love them i masturbated while reading your story i bet you have a beautiful body i am 61 but i still get super horny reading incest stories. love to hear from you and chat on line or email my email is joelholt123@gmail.com
Unlike another commentor, I'd like to thank you for not over-describing the characters. If she has nice legs that are a bit out of condition, I can fill in the details of those legs that suit me best.
I liked the controlled pace, but found myself wishing for a more intimate feeling and less distance. The feelings, conflicts, doubts.
As an example, we got a description of the photos at the end. I would have liked to learn about her feelings as the pictures were taken, the son enjoying taking pictures of her, or the feelings that came up when she looked at them again, rather than a more distancing straight description of what the photos contained.
Thanks again. It was a well-paced story with a great Winter setting. The few small complaints I mentioned certainly didn't detract from me enjoying the read or wanting more.
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Anonymous11/10/14
it's always a delight to see another story from HeyAll
Caroline nails it (while her boy Matt's nailing her): "You feel so good in me. We're a perfect match." They sure are. Look, Matt came out of that warm wet hole he's got his hard young cock jammed up in, up to his balls. It stands to reason that nothing will ever feel as good and right to him as his own mother's cunt. Just as nothing will ever feel as good and right to Caroline as her own son's powerful prick. When Matt blows his balls and shoots his mother full of his creamy semen, both of them know that that's exactly where his semen belongs. A boy's penis and his mother's vagina--the perfect match.
You had one obvious error on page 2 so you are slacking. J/K on the slacking part. I agree there is no need to describe the characters looks for we read this for the incest not how they look; it is about the taboo. If a son is lucky enough to fuck his mom that is hot enough now if she is a hot mom well kudos to him. But what gets old is when you read these descriptions and the mother is described to have model looks and the son is fit it takes away from the story because it becomes cliche. Take my sister for instance she tried to be a model and today she doesn't look one. If we ever fucked the sexiness isn't what she looks like instead what makes it sexy is she is my sister.
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Anonymous11/10/14
sweet
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Anonymous11/10/14
Very Nice.
Great story line very well written as are all your other stories.Looking forward to your next
Loved it, the story flowed along smoothly and didn't rush into the sex and there was no huge cock or tits, ok it did say what the mother thought of her body but the description was right on for a woman her age.
Her getting turned on by reading the stories was just great, after all that's why a lot of us read them too Ha Ha!
It's an obvious set-up but carried out pretty well.
I enjoyed the reluctance of the son to go up to as secluded mountain cabin w/o the proper toys to amuse himself.
It proves it's not WHAT you ask or say, but HOW you say it that registers.
All in all, a quite enjoyable romp I'd like to see more chapters elaborating on the meet-cute in the cabin.
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Anonymous11/11/14
nice job
most important I hope this is not a story issue and you are continuing this into a decent series!!!! all the best and good writing
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Anonymous11/13/14
"HOT"
This is a cute, plus an interesting story!! A hot read.
YOU EARNED 5 stars. Keep up this story, take it to the next level.
Thank you for shareing it with us.
Awesome Story..! The best storyline..! U earned 5 stars.. This should be one of my favourite erotic stories.
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Anonymous12/07/14
great job
great set up - you've really come into your own and I consider you among the elite now with guys like alwayswantedto, baron, etc.
Great job - thanks for writing this. Woulda loved a little more voyeur moments, seeing stuff they weren't supposed to see, but that's just me. Your writing and storyline were very solid.
Though it wasn't winter vacation, you've no idea how true this story is. Mom and I have been lovers for over forty years now, but I remember well the night she came to my bed when the heat went out. She had struggled with her desires for awhile, but I had for years. Mom is over eighty now and we're still lovers in love. Old ladies DO enjoy sex, just not quite as vigorously these days. Hip replacements and some positions don't work well. Ladies, if your son loves you like a man and respects you he will probably never approach you. You'll have to go to him. The one thing a son fears above all else is rejection by mom. You'll have to let him know you love him too. This doesn't make you a slut. If your married it doesn't make you unfaithful. Its different with sons than husbands. You'll never regret it. As a mother you are given the ability and capacity to love and satisfy both husband and son. Mother's hands can't type anymore so she's sitting here advising me. 'Take the chance', she says,'love is there, just show it to him'. Thanks for writing this, it just spoke to us.
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Anonymous01/16/15
More
This needs a 2nd chapter
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Anonymous01/21/15
Amazing. FIVE STARS ! ! !
I'm copying and pasting some comments on this story, because they say exactly what I think.
"Awesome Story..! The best storyline..! U earned 5 stars.. This should be one of my favourite erotic stories."
"i really liked it. erotic without being overtly pornagraphic."
"This needs a 2nd chapter."
To the anonymous who wrote the comment "us":
My dear friend, congratulations to you and your mother! All the mothers in this world should read your comment!
MANY of them would follow your advice and they would be much happier than they are... I think that is the most beautiful and complete love which is possible to exist.
Great buildup and a rather tasteful sex scene. Almost to sweet to be a wanking story.
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Anonymous07/10/15
WOW
That was fantastic, no excessive sex scenes, a very pleasant believable romance story. WELL DONE !!!.
by
Anonymous08/21/15
Fun Had By Ever one !!!!
Great Story, All of what was said and, Please "KEEP IT UP" by being the Mother all of us Want, On a daily bases. And as one of the other Commenters said, where is the Second Story with Pictures, please.
SkyRaider One
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Anonymous09/19/15
Enjoyable
Very good story, nice winter twist and good build up.
by
Anonymous11/12/15
Very nice couple
This is a most interesting and arousing story of a fine pair of people. The buildup is excellent, not too long at all. The theme is original and believable. What I like best about your mother-son incest stories is that both of the principals are highly likable, decent people. They clearly love each other very much as mother and son, and they are deeply concerned about the other's feelings. The sex doesn't just start slam-bang, but develops in a reasonable, convincing way. And when both of these delightful persons are sure that the other is truly ready for their love to progress to a sexual relationship, the emotions and actions are intensely erotic. Great job!
One little quibble, a bit of confusion of related words: "A rare blizzard came which forced all residence to stay indoors for several days. All of the residence were well prepared with food and water.” A residence is a place, a home; what you obviously mean is “residents.” Residents live in residences. Otherwise, the story is very well written.
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Anonymous12/27/15
thank you
An excelent set of stories that are well written with an emotional connection that is deffinitley expressed as if from experience. I loved the way the characters are well plotted and the challenge of emotional and mental conflict is well thought out.
So thank you for your well written stories and hope you write some follow ups to these.
. . .and likely the best of your stories I read so far. Assuredly it is worthy of five stars and should be some indicator to give a ten rating. The storm, the books, the special photos in the box. . .and mom's box was filled with her son's erection and later it was creamed nicely.
English
5 Star Story
You did a good job here, not super hot and sexy, but a deliberately paced story of a mother and son. I wonder if the cabins owner has any desire for a group sex and incest session with his mother and son. I only speculate because there was a lot of hints she offered to direct to her own secrets. Thank you
fun with your son
i got so horny reading your story . boy do i wish i was your son. i read the same kind of stories i love them i masturbated while reading your story i bet you have a beautiful body i am 61 but i still get super horny reading incest stories. love to hear from you and chat on line or email my email is joelholt123@gmail.com
Different tastes...
Unlike another commentor, I'd like to thank you for not over-describing the characters. If she has nice legs that are a bit out of condition, I can fill in the details of those legs that suit me best.
I liked the controlled pace, but found myself wishing for a more intimate feeling and less distance. The feelings, conflicts, doubts.
As an example, we got a description of the photos at the end. I would have liked to learn about her feelings as the pictures were taken, the son enjoying taking pictures of her, or the feelings that came up when she looked at them again, rather than a more distancing straight description of what the photos contained.
Thanks again. It was a well-paced story with a great Winter setting. The few small complaints I mentioned certainly didn't detract from me enjoying the read or wanting more.
it's always a delight to see another story from HeyAll
Caroline nails it (while her boy Matt's nailing her): "You feel so good in me. We're a perfect match." They sure are. Look, Matt came out of that warm wet hole he's got his hard young cock jammed up in, up to his balls. It stands to reason that nothing will ever feel as good and right to him as his own mother's cunt. Just as nothing will ever feel as good and right to Caroline as her own son's powerful prick. When Matt blows his balls and shoots his mother full of his creamy semen, both of them know that that's exactly where his semen belongs. A boy's penis and his mother's vagina--the perfect match.
I loved it.
You had one obvious error on page 2 so you are slacking. J/K on the slacking part. I agree there is no need to describe the characters looks for we read this for the incest not how they look; it is about the taboo. If a son is lucky enough to fuck his mom that is hot enough now if she is a hot mom well kudos to him. But what gets old is when you read these descriptions and the mother is described to have model looks and the son is fit it takes away from the story because it becomes cliche. Take my sister for instance she tried to be a model and today she doesn't look one. If we ever fucked the sexiness isn't what she looks like instead what makes it sexy is she is my sister.
sweet
Very Nice.
Great story line very well written as are all your other stories.Looking forward to your next
Great story
Would like to see more of your writings. Thanks
Loved it
Loved it, the story flowed along smoothly and didn't rush into the sex and there was no huge cock or tits, ok it did say what the mother thought of her body but the description was right on for a woman her age.
Her getting turned on by reading the stories was just great, after all that's why a lot of us read them too Ha Ha!
Nice winter tale
It's an obvious set-up but carried out pretty well.
I enjoyed the reluctance of the son to go up to as secluded mountain cabin w/o the proper toys to amuse himself.
It proves it's not WHAT you ask or say, but HOW you say it that registers.
All in all, a quite enjoyable romp I'd like to see more chapters elaborating on the meet-cute in the cabin.
nice job
most important I hope this is not a story issue and you are continuing this into a decent series!!!! all the best and good writing
"HOT"
This is a cute, plus an interesting story!! A hot read.
YOU EARNED 5 stars. Keep up this story, take it to the next level.
Thank you for shareing it with us.
i really liked it. erotic without being overtly pornagraphic.
Great Story
Awesome Story..! The best storyline..! U earned 5 stars.. This should be one of my favourite erotic stories.
great job
great set up - you've really come into your own and I consider you among the elite now with guys like alwayswantedto, baron, etc.
Great job - thanks for writing this. Woulda loved a little more voyeur moments, seeing stuff they weren't supposed to see, but that's just me. Your writing and storyline were very solid.
Thanks!
A very sweet and cute story!
us
Though it wasn't winter vacation, you've no idea how true this story is. Mom and I have been lovers for over forty years now, but I remember well the night she came to my bed when the heat went out. She had struggled with her desires for awhile, but I had for years. Mom is over eighty now and we're still lovers in love. Old ladies DO enjoy sex, just not quite as vigorously these days. Hip replacements and some positions don't work well. Ladies, if your son loves you like a man and respects you he will probably never approach you. You'll have to go to him. The one thing a son fears above all else is rejection by mom. You'll have to let him know you love him too. This doesn't make you a slut. If your married it doesn't make you unfaithful. Its different with sons than husbands. You'll never regret it. As a mother you are given the ability and capacity to love and satisfy both husband and son. Mother's hands can't type anymore so she's sitting here advising me. 'Take the chance', she says,'love is there, just show it to him'. Thanks for writing this, it just spoke to us.
More
This needs a 2nd chapter
Amazing. FIVE STARS ! ! !
I'm copying and pasting some comments on this story, because they say exactly what I think.
"Awesome Story..! The best storyline..! U earned 5 stars.. This should be one of my favourite erotic stories."
"i really liked it. erotic without being overtly pornagraphic."
"This needs a 2nd chapter."
To the anonymous who wrote the comment "us":
My dear friend, congratulations to you and your mother! All the mothers in this world should read your comment!
MANY of them would follow your advice and they would be much happier than they are... I think that is the most beautiful and complete love which is possible to exist.
Great buildup and a rather tasteful sex scene. Almost to sweet to be a wanking story.
WOW
That was fantastic, no excessive sex scenes, a very pleasant believable romance story. WELL DONE !!!.
Fun Had By Ever one !!!!
Great Story, All of what was said and, Please "KEEP IT UP" by being the Mother all of us Want, On a daily bases. And as one of the other Commenters said, where is the Second Story with Pictures, please.
SkyRaider One
Enjoyable
Very good story, nice winter twist and good build up.
Very nice couple
This is a most interesting and arousing story of a fine pair of people. The buildup is excellent, not too long at all. The theme is original and believable. What I like best about your mother-son incest stories is that both of the principals are highly likable, decent people. They clearly love each other very much as mother and son, and they are deeply concerned about the other's feelings. The sex doesn't just start slam-bang, but develops in a reasonable, convincing way. And when both of these delightful persons are sure that the other is truly ready for their love to progress to a sexual relationship, the emotions and actions are intensely erotic. Great job!
One little quibble, a bit of confusion of related words: "A rare blizzard came which forced all residence to stay indoors for several days. All of the residence were well prepared with food and water.” A residence is a place, a home; what you obviously mean is “residents.” Residents live in residences. Otherwise, the story is very well written.
thank you
An excelent set of stories that are well written with an emotional connection that is deffinitley expressed as if from experience. I loved the way the characters are well plotted and the challenge of emotional and mental conflict is well thought out.
So thank you for your well written stories and hope you write some follow ups to these.
Xxx sophie
Great story you should add anpther chapter
Snowed In
. . .and likely the best of your stories I read so far. Assuredly it is worthy of five stars and should be some indicator to give a ten rating. The storm, the books, the special photos in the box. . .and mom's box was filled with her son's erection and later it was creamed nicely.
So yummy!
And so well written! Thank you!
Another winner.
All of your stories make us want to know what happens later. Sort of like you bring us right to the edge of our orgasm and then... stop!
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