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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/06/14

Really?

This has got to be the dumbest fucking piece of shit story ever submitted to Literotica. 1 star only because 0 is not an option.

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by Baribrother11/06/14

it was ok

I enjoyed the build up. The sex was pretty bland. Finger sucking was good, but what about a 69? If this was their first time together they should have been nervous. They should have been clumsy. The story would have been great if it continued into the party.

I gave it a 3 star. It could have been better.

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by Anonymous11/07/14

They went from sexy and powerful to idiots

You made them sound like high school drop outs.

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