Enough is Enough

Aweful

Does she deserve to be tortured? This is supposed to be reluctance. Not BDSM.

hot hot hot

I love S&M but I also love Non-Con, and you brought them together awesomely.

Very well written! Good story.

I can't wait to read more!

I'm hoping there's a part two...

To the anon who said it was "aweful:"

The tags for this story are as follows: forced – anal – blackmail – humiliation – gangbang – reluctant – domination – forced oral – bdsm – bondage. The style of the story is very clear. Also, it's "awful," not "aweful." Thanks for reading! :)

Nah, he was right...

It definitely was awful, but not because of the torture aspect. All the descriptions were extremely tacky in nature. It was like watching low budget porn being described. There was nothing hot, or sensual about it. They might as well have been in a trailer park humping on top of a dirty stove. Both would be equally gross in the description. Who uses the word vagina to turn someone on? Who lists actual penis length in inches? Read a romance novel, or something to get some practice with writing detail.