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You Whisper My Name

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by JWren11/07/14

Lustful, feverish, satisfying

So many excellent phrases and a rhythm that complements the growing crescendo towards sated satisfaction. "A soundtrack of sighs and lustful groans" puts me right there among the "feverish thrusts" of this joyful dance.

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by Apple_of_Eden02/03/15

Picturesque Poetry !

A beautiful story told through poetry. An experience of love described as only a true poet can do. It is absolutely beautiful and as perfect a description and picture as can be painted by words. Thank you so much for sharing it.

I loved every line, but my favorite is: "We writhe as one, synchronised, joined"
I can not think of anything better in life. (with the possible exception birth and a child's laughter)

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