Wife Finally Satisfied

1 star

Whore

Is she looking for her husband?

If he was fucking Stephanie would that be OK?
No there is bitterness there, so let her get knock up, divorced, and working at Walmart then she can be happy.
OH hubby's dicky to small. Well her brain is too retarded. Time for him to move on.

No reason for Alissa to feel guilty.

She and all women deserve a real cock and gary just doesn't qualify. Alissa was satisfied by a Bull as She should be and gary with his tiny weenie must learn to accept the situation.

Interesting

Sounds like a party or two that my wife and I have attended... Thanks for the memories.

Meh

First of all, not much there.

Second, this line, "You've probably never seen a penis that big and your husband probably isn't very well endowed," is so ridiculous.

I'll assume this guy is very well-endowed, and as such is entitled to the first half of his statement, but knowing nothing about her husband the second half is just so much BS. He can assume husband is probably not AS well-endowed, but he could still be well-endowed as far as this a-hole knows.

Hey Three Inch!!

Its called being married you moron If wifey does not like hubbys equipment cut him loose and go fuck the 81st Airborne.You are an idiot.Fantasy or not its called respect but I guess thats above your comprehension level

pure dribble

not worth reading and the person who wrote is not worth the time of day.

Alas - Airborne days numbered.

If the wife wants to gangbang the Airborne (82nd or 101st or 173rd) she better hurry. These units will stop Airborne training soon.

Redundant as all get out

I lost track of how many times the writer used "for the first time"; let's just say it was too much. Time-hopping ("is" and "was") caught my eye as well. No need to describe what people look like, let us use our imagination. And for the love of readers everywhere, please take an English class before writing again. I was catching edits rather than reading the story! The idea for the story was good, but the execution was lousy.

Lit really is circling the drain, just got to hope all these sicko writers go down with it.

let's see if I can figure out what is wrong here

they have been married six years, but everything she jusst did was for the first time?

and if she doesn't want to have that awkward conversation with her husband she better get to a pharmacy to pick up some morning after pills.

Rings true

I had an affair with a married woman who acted like this. I later found out some of it was her role playing a fantasy about being an uptight virgin bride - a twist on the rape fantasy, but I didn't really care. It was fun while it lasted. This story rings true to me. Nicely paced.

NOT GOOD, BUT NOT NEARLY AS BAD AS SOME ANONS. CLAIM

Ignore the Anons. who just proclaim a work is a piece of trash without offering constructive criticism. They have no idea how to do better. Since you are new, I give this a three.
Constructive Comment: You do too much telling and not enough showing. Get a book on creative writing and spend a little time each day putting what it says into practice.

Good Luck!

Not enough of a story

We don't really know much of anything about the wife, the husband or the mystery man in this story. Why did this woman have sex with a stranger? Why did he? What was their marriage like before this story? What was it like afterward? To me, those are the most interesting parts of a story like this. This was merely a sex scene.

As others have already pointed out, you need to pick a tense (past or present) and stick to it. Past is always better. Just pretend you're telling us a story about what happened to you last year.

Also, as another pointed out, avoid giving us full paragraphs of the descriptions of the characters. Simply work that in as you tell the story.

I do have to say, I always laugh out loud whenever some annony describes a story as "dribble." It's "drivel", you idiot! LOL!

Thanks for the effort . . .

I guess, but it wasn't very interesting nor entertaining. Sees her first big cock and becomes instant slut? Yawn.

You call that a story

What crap

re:carolinadreamer baby

The only ass that needs to be ignored is you. Again you idiots think your opinion is the only one that counts. Have to agree with you Swingerjoe, for once you're right, not much of a story, just a description of porn. But I also have to laugh. It doesn't take much to make you chuckle, does it? Just mention the word "anon" and your funny bone is activated. (note: I'll make this anonymous) to tickle your bone.

Good story wish that there was more

Liked this story nice surprise to find on your way to the bathroom. He opened her up I do know a few ladies that are like this and could use a trip to the bathroom.
Make part two about her laying there since her hubby is not looking for her. lets see what other fun she can get into...

Bad story...

A bad story about a cheating wife...Less than 1*...

Enjoyed the story

Not very original but short and to the point. It goes into the category of women who secretly crave a large cock that their hubby can't provide, so the ease of the conquest becomes apparent. This is a very common story line so I don't understand why so many people leaving comments try to belittle the writer.

spoken like a true cuckold

Ray Roberts get right to the point stating his case for willing cuck's. You go "little boy"!

nice short story

This is truly an erotic erotic short story. I really loved the to the point approach without any frills. And it worked for me. Keep up the good work.

Fuck off impo _58 you fucking turd.

Fuck off to another category you simple-minded jerk.

And before calclover comes in about people having a different opinion etc. Fuck you too.

5*

written

by for needle dicks
1star

Really? Oh look a big penis! I have to have it. I'm under its spell.

I'll suck it even though I don't do it for my husband because its so big.

The author is a ducking moron who shouldn't be allowed to breathe the same air as the rest of us in case his special brand of idiocy is contagious.

Ild tell you to fuck off but that's still more sex than you deserve.

Puzzling.

Why was a man in a bedroom sleeping with a party going on? He woke up and started masturbating? WTF -Please explain this. Did I miss something. Sleeping during a party? Story would have been more interesting if husband had caught her. What would he have done? Got a hard on, joined her on the bed, lapped her cunt clean like a good cucky would or told her not to bother to come home since she doesn't have one anymore. A little consequences good or bad goes a long way to liven up a story. 3*

Just another pathetic heartless CUNT wife story

No loving wife here. and the reason hubby isn't looking for his heartless cold fish wife is because her is too busy fucking Stephanie. hahahaha!

LOL

Comments are better than the story. What a hoot!

Worthless whore

No respect for the man who is committed to her. 1 star only because you cannot vote zero. Big penis for brains has no respect either.

????

@ threeinch It is obligatory a husband to live together with a wife? According to you the divorce would be forbidden? Are you Nazi, because Himmler wanted to ban the divorce after the triumph of the 2nd World War in Germany!

Good

Maybe not a great story but very good for a first try! Keep it up!!

jesus on a pogo stick

you have a lot of nerve posting illiterate crap

Nice start,

never mind the haters. They are so boring.

Nice story....

Thank you for sharing your story with us. 5 stars for your efforts. Do ignore all the haters and please write more stories.
The hatters have nothing better to do. They never write a thing other than negative crap on others stories.

A sad sad story

of yet another bonobo wife who wasn't satisfied. Probably satisfied to bank his paycheck though. And satisfied to betray him. And satisfied to feel no remorse for that betrayal.

It's a sad commentary on Alicia and Gary's marriage and a sadder commentary on Alicia's lack of respect for her husband, her family, and her commitments.

So it's the first time but I'll bet not the only time and I would also wager that she doesn't have the integrity to end the marriage and then hunt cock. Oh yeah and "It was a mistake", "I love you with all my heart (except the part that decided to betray you, you loser)" ,"You can't satisfy me" ,"You weren't supposed to find out", and "It was only sex."

Sad. It's just as well that she killed the marriage, couldn't have been much of one anyway. After all she wasn't satisfied...