The conflict of emotions is perfectly played and she is now full pelt down the slide into depravity. My only slight niggle was with ch1 and trust. She was clearly disgusted with AtM but he forced her anyway. He is deciding her limits for her.
But that aside I really enjoyed it so roll on three.
It's always nice when an author listens and replies to comments. I like that this is on the dark and edgy side of BDSM, particularly as it is well written, but that particular scene didn't sit right. She does have to actually have some way of saying no and him stopping.
Don't think the current BF is going to last long though lol
Thank you for re-writing the first chapter and submitting the second, dodgette. You write very well and I can see no reason for not awarding you five stars for this piece. Well done -- more like it, if you would!
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I liked it
The conflict of emotions is perfectly played and she is now full pelt down the slide into depravity. My only slight niggle was with ch1 and trust. She was clearly disgusted with AtM but he forced her anyway. He is deciding her limits for her.
But that aside I really enjoyed it so roll on three.
Thank you dodgette
It's always nice when an author listens and replies to comments. I like that this is on the dark and edgy side of BDSM, particularly as it is well written, but that particular scene didn't sit right. She does have to actually have some way of saying no and him stopping.
Don't think the current BF is going to last long though lol
That was very good. Verey good indeed.
Thank you for re-writing the first chapter and submitting the second, dodgette. You write very well and I can see no reason for not awarding you five stars for this piece. Well done -- more like it, if you would!
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