The husband deserved it...how can a man be so stupid? As soon as she told him about the party, he should have cancel the night with his Ex friend...But no, and so now he must face the consequences...It's a pity that she will have to face them too, just because she didn't refuse to do the handjob...
Poor Leanna, first being allowed to give Bob a blow-job and then being abused by her husband. He would know better! Nobody has the power to stop when being arose. To start an erotic action, if only a blow-job, most often results in further, deeper actions. The common sense (the brain) is cut off in fathour of the carnal behaviour.
I like this story, both as a cautionary tale and good, escapist fun. I like that the wife in this story was so revolted by Bob, and yet became so hypnotized by his big tool that she became helpless and unable to control her urges. A little far-fetched, to be sure, but still an erotic tale. Thanks for sharing.
Plus 9" = female surrender and a relationship test - beware what you wish for!
Nothing like a big dick and the damage they do. They are things of raw beauty that complete the dominant male image and stories like this never fail to arouse both sexes. When a guy prompts his wife to take on a 9" monster they better know what they are doing women are often really turned on by size regardless of what some guys think and being in love with your wife won't protect you from her new found lust to be filled and taken roughly.
poorly written, several editing errors, and continuity flaws.. the storyline was erotic and plausible, but yes Stu was a complete tool himself if he thought for one second nothing else would happen
Agree with the others that the story could have been written slightly better, but such an erotic turn on that I ignored some of the more glaring errors. I want to know more. Does Leanna go back to Bob for more? Does stu give in and accept he is now a cuckold?
Thanks for all the "Favorite Author" hearts I received, and for the constructive comments. I underscore "constructive" comments. The typos pointed out above are acknowledged. Thanks, I should've caught them. Your comments are priceless to me. In the interest of writing better, when I get comments such as "poorly written" with no farther details I usually click on the name of the person doing the critiquing to see how many and what type stories they might've written themselves, so I can see how it should've been done correctly. To my disappointment I found nothing has ever been authored, and that all the "favorite" stories selected, concern incest. I have never done an incest story, so I read a few on that site to see what it is so well-liked about them and what I'm missing in my stories. Since I have no expertise in that particular subject, I can't say if they were any good or not, because I don't know the subject area. Please come back to me and tell me what it was that you particularly didn't like and I will try to correct that for anything I might submit in the future. In any event, my hat is always off to authors who try, for at least they made an effort. Thanks for all the people who submit stories. Some are better than others, but all who try, are winners! Thanks again fans!
cleo
First, I enjoyed this story. It has lots of the themes I write about. I did have some problems with it. There's no real description of Leanne other then she's hot and has nice legs. What about hair and breasts? At what point did she take her dress off? I would change it up some and have the husband okay a handjob and watch his wife jerk off Bob. She can't get him off with her hand and Bob says seeing her topless will help, she pulls off dress and goes back to stroking him maybe even titty fucking him. The husband enjoys the site finally objecting when it turns to a blow job. He grows upset seeing Bob come in her mouth and his wife greedily sucking every drop. He's even more upset when Bob flips her over on the couch, rips off her panties and fucks her making her talk lke a slut. She's also not on birthcontrol and Bob cums in her. Afterwards, he throws Bob out and forgives his wife providing it doesn't happen again, but Bob shows up the next day after the husband leaves for his flight....
Loved this story. I disagree with the comments that you should have described her better or you should have had stu watch the hand job and told her to take her top off. The fantasy is what Leanna does when left alone... Not what she does when her husband tells her to do it. It's her inability to control herself around this brutish man that makes the story work so well. And there's no need to describe the exact moment a dress comes off, we get it and don't have to have every single action written down. You did a great job balancing the details with the emotions and keeping the pace of the story right. Great job!
puts the lie to the notion that this is Leanna's actual story. this is more of a stroke piece and for those who like that sort of shallow over the top stuff it gets the job done.
English
He deserved it...
The husband deserved it...how can a man be so stupid? As soon as she told him about the party, he should have cancel the night with his Ex friend...But no, and so now he must face the consequences...It's a pity that she will have to face them too, just because she didn't refuse to do the handjob...
Expected outcome
Poor Leanna, first being allowed to give Bob a blow-job and then being abused by her husband. He would know better! Nobody has the power to stop when being arose. To start an erotic action, if only a blow-job, most often results in further, deeper actions. The common sense (the brain) is cut off in fathour of the carnal behaviour.
Be careful what you wish for!
I like this story, both as a cautionary tale and good, escapist fun. I like that the wife in this story was so revolted by Bob, and yet became so hypnotized by his big tool that she became helpless and unable to control her urges. A little far-fetched, to be sure, but still an erotic tale. Thanks for sharing.
Plus 9" = female surrender and a relationship test - beware what you wish for!
Nothing like a big dick and the damage they do. They are things of raw beauty that complete the dominant male image and stories like this never fail to arouse both sexes. When a guy prompts his wife to take on a 9" monster they better know what they are doing women are often really turned on by size regardless of what some guys think and being in love with your wife won't protect you from her new found lust to be filled and taken roughly.
Stupid people
How did Leanne get to marry this stupid guy in the first place? Then Bob turns up wearing jersey sweatpants, this should have warning if nothing else.
who's fantasy.. not leanna's.(dick head husbands)
poorly written, several editing errors, and continuity flaws.. the storyline was erotic and plausible, but yes Stu was a complete tool himself if he thought for one second nothing else would happen
turn on
Agree with the others that the story could have been written slightly better, but such an erotic turn on that I ignored some of the more glaring errors. I want to know more. Does Leanna go back to Bob for more? Does stu give in and accept he is now a cuckold?
Thanks for all the "Favorite Author" hearts I received, and for the constructive comments. I underscore "constructive" comments. The typos pointed out above are acknowledged. Thanks, I should've caught them. Your comments are priceless to me. In the interest of writing better, when I get comments such as "poorly written" with no farther details I usually click on the name of the person doing the critiquing to see how many and what type stories they might've written themselves, so I can see how it should've been done correctly. To my disappointment I found nothing has ever been authored, and that all the "favorite" stories selected, concern incest. I have never done an incest story, so I read a few on that site to see what it is so well-liked about them and what I'm missing in my stories. Since I have no expertise in that particular subject, I can't say if they were any good or not, because I don't know the subject area. Please come back to me and tell me what it was that you particularly didn't like and I will try to correct that for anything I might submit in the future. In any event, my hat is always off to authors who try, for at least they made an effort. Thanks for all the people who submit stories. Some are better than others, but all who try, are winners! Thanks again fans!
cleo
role playing played out so well
malpractice?
liked it
loved the story but wish they would have stayed at the hj or bj. would have been far better
Good but could have been better
First, I enjoyed this story. It has lots of the themes I write about. I did have some problems with it. There's no real description of Leanne other then she's hot and has nice legs. What about hair and breasts? At what point did she take her dress off? I would change it up some and have the husband okay a handjob and watch his wife jerk off Bob. She can't get him off with her hand and Bob says seeing her topless will help, she pulls off dress and goes back to stroking him maybe even titty fucking him. The husband enjoys the site finally objecting when it turns to a blow job. He grows upset seeing Bob come in her mouth and his wife greedily sucking every drop. He's even more upset when Bob flips her over on the couch, rips off her panties and fucks her making her talk lke a slut. She's also not on birthcontrol and Bob cums in her. Afterwards, he throws Bob out and forgives his wife providing it doesn't happen again, but Bob shows up the next day after the husband leaves for his flight....
he asked her to "help out" his friend
and now he is upset that she did?
it didn't really count, "it was only sex"
stupid is as stupid does!
Great story
Loved this story. I disagree with the comments that you should have described her better or you should have had stu watch the hand job and told her to take her top off. The fantasy is what Leanna does when left alone... Not what she does when her husband tells her to do it. It's her inability to control herself around this brutish man that makes the story work so well. And there's no need to describe the exact moment a dress comes off, we get it and don't have to have every single action written down. You did a great job balancing the details with the emotions and keeping the pace of the story right. Great job!
Great story!
This was so hot, I loved how well it developed and flowed.
A Ha
Stu-Pid. You wanted Bob to get a handjob in your home, should have given it yourself.
All the huge cock hyperbole
puts the lie to the notion that this is Leanna's actual story. this is more of a stroke piece and for those who like that sort of shallow over the top stuff it gets the job done.
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