All Comments on 'Mommy's Naughty Little Boy'

Hey Dude,

I really enjoyed the story, but get to work on part two.

This could be great with momw and the boys and even the moms getting it on.

grass

Um, I don't think so. It was any erotic read though..except for the flying "manjuice.". Keep on writing!

Very rarely do I find a story devoid of anything redeeming to say about it.

You saw a cock and cum on Cinemax? Not only are you 'here'ing things, you're 'sea'ing things, too.

The 12-year old who wrote this needs a swift kick in the ass for posting such garbled shit; the spelling and the fevered rush to get to the (very poorly written) sex-scenes immediately gave his age away. Go away, grow up, get some hair on your balls, actually have sex, with a real, live female (species of your choice) then write about sex, because this was possibly the most juvenile piece of pointless shit I have ever read on this site, and that's going some. You suck in so many ways I actually applauded you for winning the 'Terrible Sex in a Dumb Story' Award. Minus 500 stars.