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by smoothboi11/09/14

Yeah. I want to get turned out like that.

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by Weyrcub11/10/14

A GOOD INTRO

Very well written and hot.
Good pacing to the action and plot.
Now that you've given us a good teaser, the readers will definitely be wanting more.
KEEP WRITING - you're good!

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