Weekend Away Ch. 03

And when she woke up

She went straight to the hospital and had a rape kit done. All the bruises were noted on her chart. The Police were called and the asshole was arrested. He was charged with everything from assault and battery to kidnapping and rape. Convicted, he was sentenced to 18 years in prison, no chance of parole. I wonder how he thinks his plan worked out? Even for fiction, this was a thoroughly disgusting story. No stars.

thank you for your comment

I am sorry you did not like it. I don't understand why someone would read it through If the found it so disgusting.

2*s

Three chapters to cover one moment in a marriage.

Not a story. No conflict. No resolution. Just a couple exploring an aspect of their relationship. So 2*s.
Like the fast pace and great description of physical activity. But that leads a reader to conclude you could have done much more. So very disappointed.

Hopefully you can learn from this mistake. Wants2benaughty I wants you to write a whole story.
Good luck,lol.


AMerryMan

I thought it was ok, could be a bit mote descriptive but still exciting! The comment about going to jail and such clearly doesn't realize this story is in the nonconsent category.

Another chapter coming...

There is one more yet to come!

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Thank you for your comment :)