Loved it was amazing this is something i wish was read id ask my step sister to ride with me wow continue on with part 2 please it was an amazing and sexy short story would love for a part 2
I gave it a 5 . . so refreshing to have a new idea of bringing the lovers together many thanks
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Anonymous11/13/14
Check Yourself
@rightbank Don't comment on someone's spelling when you can't spell the word itself correctly.
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Anonymous11/16/14
@rightbank was playing off the anonymous comment
Where "spelling" was incorrectly spelled "speeling" - @rightbank was being funny
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Anonymous04/30/15
another loser hack
where's the beginning? where's the background and character development? where's the end? all you gave us is a rushed middle, do all serious readers a favor and delete this chapter and post a COMPLETE STORY OR NOTHING AT ALL.
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Anonymous07/23/15
To the person who wrote the "another loser hack" comment
Why be so mean? Just don't read it, or post nicely that you were disappointed. Some of us "serious readers" enjoyed the quick, guilty pleasure.
English
Amazing!
Loved it!! Is there going to be more?
Hope so.
Hope so, it was perfectly readable, great speeling.
I love it when an author is given a compliment
on the speeling in the story.
It makes everything else just fade away.
lol
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would love to read about this continuing
Loved it was amazing this is something i wish was read id ask my step sister to ride with me wow continue on with part 2 please it was an amazing and sexy short story would love for a part 2
Great story and easy to read.
Far fetched but lI liked it
Oh what the hell 5 stars.
somthing different
I gave it a 5 . . so refreshing to have a new idea of bringing the lovers together many thanks
Check Yourself
@rightbank Don't comment on someone's spelling when you can't spell the word itself correctly.
@rightbank was playing off the anonymous comment
Where "spelling" was incorrectly spelled "speeling" - @rightbank was being funny
another loser hack
where's the beginning? where's the background and character development? where's the end? all you gave us is a rushed middle, do all serious readers a favor and delete this chapter and post a COMPLETE STORY OR NOTHING AT ALL.
To the person who wrote the "another loser hack" comment
Why be so mean? Just don't read it, or post nicely that you were disappointed. Some of us "serious readers" enjoyed the quick, guilty pleasure.
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