Usually enjoy your stories. Wish this one would've had a tag to let me know it was just a cheating wife story so I could've skipped it. Oh well.. won't score it just because of your other works. No offense intended or taken.
Do kinda wish Brian had been screwing Britney while wife was preggo. Wouldn't have made wife character any better but Brian wouldn't have been the fool and joke his wife made him out to be.
It is very difficult to write fiction without revealing something about yourself. Tricia's lack of empathy for her baby or her husband is chilling. Think about it.
Still one of my favorite authors. This one just didn't hit the spot. Normally the female characters in Amyyum's stories are more well-rounded and dynamic. This one seemed no different than the cut and paste characters in most of the other author's stories on this site. Amyyum is far more talented than the garden-variety "Loving Wives" author and her claim to fame is excellent female character building. Even when you don't like the female per se you have to admit that she seems realistic. Maybe next time.
This time the story is even more sad...Not one but two cheaters...How could they love their spouses if they didn't felt at least a little remorse? What is out of context and not believable, is that they after all that stop to cheat...Ok, I understand that part was only to the story...Lucky husband that at least the child was his...The wife wasn't any more...
I enjoyed it, although the characters might have been fleshed out a bit more, especially the cheating bit. Any remorse on her part?
It's a shame, twentyseven thinks Agatha Christy must have had murderous tendencies because she wrote about it so much. It's a common misperception, but most authors write from their imagination, not from experience. Frankly real life isn't all that interesting.
Because these stories make it OK for the husband to bed any slut out there. The only requirement is that he have fun. If so then no guilt or remorse. And as will typically happen after delivery her libido will drop a lot. So he should be banging sluts every night after work. Get home at 11 PM give the wife a half kiss and go to bed.
Two cheater with no remorse, happily planning their future trysys. When they get caught the price will be astronomical. They not only cheat on their spouses but their freinds. That is sad.
Well written but didn't hit my hot spots on carnal or literary levels
This was written as a lark, with a kind of torn from the pages of a secret diary feel. Personally I think the unbounded and contortionist nature of the 'preggo' sex took away from the story, never mind the adultery. To quote Otis Redding 'Try a Little Tenderness' - that would have been my angle had this been my story. Clearly.the author was aiming for a different demographic.
Oh well , amyyum did a multiple things VERY well. The action was heated, smirky humor and the vivid physical changes wrought by pregnancy were all on point. I admire the unapologetic stance this author's narrators take regardless of whether the Loving Wives habitués will agree or no.
You've had a lot of wild hairs lately, Amy. Can't say that I liked this one all that much, but you're still one of the most talented writers on here. Next up, how about some BTBastard? That's your bread and butter.
Great read, I highly enjoyed it even if others didn't... But that is what is so great about lierotica. There is something for every one.. This peaked my cum meter
I've come across your name as a real BTB writer. After reading several of your stories I don't see it. You seem to write stories that justify cheating. I don't like cheaters of any sex. I enjoy stories where the cheaters lose and non-cheaters win. I do enjoy your literary style. I will read a couple more stories to see what happens. Thank you for your writing...even if I don't care for all your stories.
Same old amyWHORE shit. amyWHORE writes crap with the sole purpose of annoying men. She hates all men who aren't wimpy fags like her cuck husband!!! Rate accordingly!
English
Sorry Amy wished you'd have warned me.
Usually enjoy your stories. Wish this one would've had a tag to let me know it was just a cheating wife story so I could've skipped it. Oh well.. won't score it just because of your other works. No offense intended or taken.
Do kinda wish Brian had been screwing Britney while wife was preggo. Wouldn't have made wife character any better but Brian wouldn't have been the fool and joke his wife made him out to be.
Anyway, best of luck to you!
Very good story!!!!
Congrats!
Beware
It is very difficult to write fiction without revealing something about yourself. Tricia's lack of empathy for her baby or her husband is chilling. Think about it.
Hot, hot, hot
Since I have a pregnancy fetish too, this story was one of the hottest ever for me on this site. LOVED it!
Agree with DFWbeast
Still one of my favorite authors. This one just didn't hit the spot. Normally the female characters in Amyyum's stories are more well-rounded and dynamic. This one seemed no different than the cut and paste characters in most of the other author's stories on this site. Amyyum is far more talented than the garden-variety "Loving Wives" author and her claim to fame is excellent female character building. Even when you don't like the female per se you have to admit that she seems realistic. Maybe next time.
This is a cheating husband story more than a cheating wife one
Who did the seduction? Who took advantage of someone in a vulnerable position? A husband, not a wife.
Anyway, I really enjoyed it; 5* for me.
This time two cheaters meet...
This time the story is even more sad...Not one but two cheaters...How could they love their spouses if they didn't felt at least a little remorse? What is out of context and not believable, is that they after all that stop to cheat...Ok, I understand that part was only to the story...Lucky husband that at least the child was his...The wife wasn't any more...
Pretty good
I enjoyed it, although the characters might have been fleshed out a bit more, especially the cheating bit. Any remorse on her part?
It's a shame, twentyseven thinks Agatha Christy must have had murderous tendencies because she wrote about it so much. It's a common misperception, but most authors write from their imagination, not from experience. Frankly real life isn't all that interesting.
Chilley
Still get a kick
Because these stories make it OK for the husband to bed any slut out there. The only requirement is that he have fun. If so then no guilt or remorse. And as will typically happen after delivery her libido will drop a lot. So he should be banging sluts every night after work. Get home at 11 PM give the wife a half kiss and go to bed.
Sad Story...
Two cheater with no remorse, happily planning their future trysys. When they get caught the price will be astronomical. They not only cheat on their spouses but their freinds. That is sad.
Well written but didn't hit my hot spots on carnal or literary levels
This was written as a lark, with a kind of torn from the pages of a secret diary feel. Personally I think the unbounded and contortionist nature of the 'preggo' sex took away from the story, never mind the adultery. To quote Otis Redding 'Try a Little Tenderness' - that would have been my angle had this been my story. Clearly.the author was aiming for a different demographic.
Oh well , amyyum did a multiple things VERY well. The action was heated, smirky humor and the vivid physical changes wrought by pregnancy were all on point. I admire the unapologetic stance this author's narrators take regardless of whether the Loving Wives habitués will agree or no.
Pregnancy as an excuse for cheating...
You've had a lot of wild hairs lately, Amy. Can't say that I liked this one all that much, but you're still one of the most talented writers on here. Next up, how about some BTBastard? That's your bread and butter.
3 Stars.
Loved it! Thanks for sharing your story!
Loved the idea
Great read, I highly enjoyed it even if others didn't... But that is what is so great about lierotica. There is something for every one.. This peaked my cum meter
A BTB writer!
I've come across your name as a real BTB writer. After reading several of your stories I don't see it. You seem to write stories that justify cheating. I don't like cheaters of any sex. I enjoy stories where the cheaters lose and non-cheaters win. I do enjoy your literary style. I will read a couple more stories to see what happens. Thank you for your writing...even if I don't care for all your stories.
good one pager
One of the better one pagers here. the third paragraph hooks you ,and you have to finish.
I would have liked a bit more dialogue.
5
to offset the asshole of LIT's 1 vote. This fag reads all of these stories and then votes 1. I'm here to vote 5! Eat shit annony!!
1*
Same old amyWHORE shit. amyWHORE writes crap with the sole purpose of annoying men. She hates all men who aren't wimpy fags like her cuck husband!!! Rate accordingly!
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