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Great story!
Very good writing. Hot story
hubbie is gay,wife is a slut.
You have not written a good story, this is gay dog shit, little dude.
I liked it...why?
Even not being a LW story I liked it...why? Because She was a dumb woman and he showed to be a smart guy: He got a girlfriend and lived with her all his dark fantasies.Then after all this, he will drop her and find a proper woman to be his wifeand the mother of his children. This is the only reason for 3 *...His smartness!!
Well written, but what kinda.....
.....dope lets his girlfriend get hokey-pokey with a stranger?
It was "going a bit too far" in the first episode. Now, it's way out at the end of cannery row.....and no way to undo the train wreck she just created.....for whatever stupid reason or excuse. Killed any hope of going on together from here.
Best if this poor fool gets out for some fresh air and when they get out to go "freshen up" dumps their stuff and heads back home to clean out and get established far, far away from this total slut. He should wonder how much screwing around had been going on all this time and needs to get tested for STDs ASAP!
Definitely not a "meet my folks" kinda girlfriend.
Quality, man. Real quality!
Oh, a rare thing, but in spite of my gut reaction to the story, it is pretty well written and well edited (for the most part). Why rare? I gave it 3 stars on strength of presentation. If there were a separate category for content, I'd have four or five-starred it for presentation and on content....one-bombed it.....
but I gotta respect the skill.
Please finish your story!
Seriously, the cliffhangers leave me wanting more. Does Amanda leave her boyfriend to travel the road with the hitchhiker? Does she start a new life of cheating? Or does she return to her boyfriend? These stories were very hot. Please keep writing. :)
Keep going! You're doing great!
Eventually, these three will be arriving at a motel for the night, and I'd love to see what this story will reveal when the boyfriend happens to fall asleep in the bed they all share together, and the two "lovers" are still wide awake wanting more out of the affair. Food for thought in a future installment of the series. :)
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