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Hypnotist Next Door Ch. 06

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by timberwolffxdl11/14/14

but...Karen?

Seems a little of the story was left out in the epilogue. Or is there a chapter 7?

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by SheriffBart11/15/14

Karen

No chapter seven planned at this time. Maybe I'll pick up the story later when I have some other projects off the front burner, but for now, this is how it ends. Karen is there to complete the picture. Jeanette is reunited with her hubby and fully cured now, so she doesn't need to continue to be Mark's bitch....all the time. That mean Mark can concentrate most of his attention on his cut sub girlfriend and only play with Mom occasionally. I really would like to write some scenes with the four of them but I just haven't the time right now.
Thanks for the feedback. :-)

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by Anonymous11/27/14

slightly off

women are a bit more complicated than this.i would wager this is either a first time author or a man trying to capture a womans being.I have been fortunate to train and own a number of lovely men and women.trust me women need more emotion to give in to training.you have to play with their minds.Its more challenging to do so,and you succeed in bending them to your will less often.but very very rewarding.this author seems to think a bit to much like a man does.

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