Weekend with Dad Pt. 01

please continue this story

5 stars

Agree with previous comment and requesting more. The steam between these two means this is not a new thing between them. Would like more background leading up to the story.

nice start

should keep it going when the wife/mom gets home her totaly clueless them getting away with it and her not even noticing anything

thanks
carol

Loved the 'intro'!

This looks like it's going to be an interesting tale. I loved that little drop-in reference to "house Slytherin", regarding her choice of wardrobe. Appropriate, for what appears to be a crafty, scheming little minx!

look forward to next chapter

I so look forward to the next chapter, love to see where it takes them

Oh yes!

I do like where this is going! Anxiously waiting for the next chapter. Please don't make us wait too long!

Excellent

You can honestly tell the stories that are written that care about their work. This author obviously cares a great deal. Absolutely fascinating work so far. Well done.

Good beginning

You are a good story teller and you build the sexual tension skillfully. I have a personal interest in daughter/daddy stories and I look forward to the next chapter

I Can't

wait to read part two of your story, I have a feeling its going to be very very hot....

Great Part One

I look forward to reading and enjoying more from you, awesome start.

You didn't get to anything good. What was the point to this if you wasn't going to finish.

Can't wait for part 2.

I'm looking forward to see how your story develops.