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*POP*-ped me...
Damn, shoulda waited a few moments to calm down before voting - only gave you 4 stars by accident. Sorry.
I like this story, and even though knowing very little about the protagonist, I've kinda fallen for her & want to know more of her story & this relationship. She's maddeningly likable yet I can't figure out why. This story grabbed me viscerally & emotionally. It was quick, short, sneaked up on me, grabbed me. Really well done! Write another chapter.
XOXO
Erin
Thanks!
Really appreciate the comments. Am open to receiving constructive criticism for sure.
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