Prom Pt. 03

A great chapter. This story is coming along nicely. I hope the date go good and not turn out to be a disaster with Kevin finding him to be a guy and go ballistic. If it goes good he could love being Ellie full time.

keep up the good work .

Coming Along

The story is coming along nicely. Good Job of work some of Ellie's back story in to this chapter.
Some minor mistakes the word processor would not have found were there. Like mistakenly calling Kelly, jelly.
Again very good and hope to read chapter 4 soon.

Transitioning

Ellie's life with Danielle and Kelly is coming along nicely. Have one or both of the girl's kiss him/her, so that he can know and feel the love they have for him/her as well.
I look forward to Prom Pt. 04.

Love the story can't wait for part 4

Ellie has Started A Very Long Journey And...

...I'm so glad you're writing it down here. I hope that some professional help is brought into her story soon so she can really understand the direction her journey needs to take. We can make guesses from the information given so far, and gender dsyphoria seems to be heading the list, but nailing it down at this point would help. There is a lot of criticism of the writing... which if its source is an anon, needs to be evaluated on how helpful a criticism it actually seems to be. In this story's case... the storyline, while familiar, has unique elements and has a realistic feel that I hope will be continued. Most of the characters are pretty well fleshed out, but your main character needs a lot more work and background added. You can still do this along the way, thru small flashback vignettes and that type of thing. Its a good story, please continue it :) 5 stars. Cheers! --- Josie

part 4 as soon as possible

some times friends are really good .. and can guide us to get things what we are missing in life .. nice start ... hope you will post part 4 soon ...

great work

Can't wait for the next addition

fun looking forward to the next chaper