All Comments on 'Alien v Predator: Insemination Ch. 05'

I waited a loooooong time for you to get back to this story. What Happened??? did you take a vacation? Anyway, good pick up from where you left off. Still wondering about the two predators still out there. I don't feel I will be waiting long for the next chapter to find out... I hope.

Finally after years the story continues!!!! Glad to see that the quality is still there!! Cant wait for part 6!! Hopefully it wont be as long this time lol. Good work!!

WOOHOO! UPDATE TO THE STORY! *happy-dance*

Omfg, I cannot wait for the next part! I want to see how this ends! Very terrified for Taylor, btw...

Wow, an update! This is an awesome story and I'm delighted you decided to continue it. I would love to know what happens to Alicia and Taylor - will he be given to the Queen? What sort of creature will Alicia give birth to? Can't wait for the next update!

FUCKING AWESOME! You hit upon a kink of mine! Love the Alien Xenomorphs! It brings up visions of this....

http://rule34-data-000.paheal.net/_images/6202878595184073a7051b374e02fd22/1524927%20-%20Alien%20Meandraco%20Xenomorph.jpg

Hey there, I'm glad you decided to continue this series! I love how you described Alicia's experience at the hands (and dick) of the Predalien and her reaction to the Hiphugger. I really look forward to finding out what kind of alien she gives birth to, and I wonder what's going to happen to Taylor? Please keep up the excellent work! I wish you the best of luck writing the next installment!

Somebody should make a comic or illustration of this... it's pretty good

this is one of the best damn stories i've ever seen for Alien or Predator DO MORE!!!5E

More! I need more, i need more, i need more! Oh sorry please lol

Dude, please continue this. Leaving us with the cliffhanger of Taylor dragged before the queen and Alicia becoming xenopreds baby mama ain't. I speak for us all when I say we Want More!!

*Cliffhanger intensifies*

Just when we get to find out what actually happens when there was no face-hugging involved. BAM, Cliffhanger, right in the face!

._.

Honestly, that CH was cruel. :C

All in all though, good job. :)

Not usually into this kind of kink, but I found this series oddly arousing. I do hope Alicia and Taylor get to have sex at some point, with the same kind of juicy writing you apply to the aliens ;)

Good work!

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Update soon, please...

Would like more please

Love the story so far, please update soon.

The ntr just makes this disgusting only sick beta males would enjoy this shit

Since it appears you are not going to continue this story to a proper conclusion it appears someone else may have decided to take your idea and write their own. Google search "Corporal Alicia Jackson" and you'll fine two entries, one at goodreads.com and the other at barnesandnoble. The title is "The Predator's Hunt" (goodreads) and "The Predator's Hunt - Alien Breeding (barnesandnoble), both under the pen name Cora Adel. She uses the exact same character name. I have not read her e-book because both websites want money so I don't know if she stole just the MCs name or also excerpts from your story for hers. Anyway her story was published on Nov 16, 2013 (both websites) whereas the first four chapters of your story was published on here between 2011 and 2012. Chapter 5 was in 2014, a year after her story was published.

I really enjoyed reading this story but sadly it appears that since the last (this) installment was posted 11/12/14 one can only conclude this has been abandoned by the author. :(