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spelling

The spelling needs serious work as many are wrong. Like "maximising" the any good dictionary lists as "maximizing" so find one and then use it.

Call an editor

Then try again

British vs. American English

'Maximise' and 'maximising' are perfectly correct in British English (I was born and educated in England) and Australian English (I currently live in Australia). (And I've just checked the dictionary to be sure!) Perhaps the problem isn't my spelling but that we are divided by a common language?!

English BA Here

I saw no glaring problems with your story. I have definitely seen much worse! I found it to be well paced and a good read.

That was hot. Thanks for that ;)

Wow!!!!!!

I'm not sure what some people are complaining about... That was amazing! Seriously... Fuck me!

Wow!

Awesome!