Please read this new author. His style is like a breath of Fresh Air to me; not your typical 'beginners' posting - but much better. I like his approach to let the reader into the main character's thought processes, almost as if he was dictating moment by moment when the chip are down. How was your first time? How will your first time happen? Read on and ... remember what it "should have been" for a positive first time experience. I support your efforts and look forward to your future postings; longer or more thought-filled short ones. I can see many more elements to your creative mind. Tony
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Almost the same thing happened to me, as the friend... recently! Were you hiding in the bushes...?
New Author with Serious Potential
Please read this new author. His style is like a breath of Fresh Air to me; not your typical 'beginners' posting - but much better. I like his approach to let the reader into the main character's thought processes, almost as if he was dictating moment by moment when the chip are down. How was your first time? How will your first time happen? Read on and ... remember what it "should have been" for a positive first time experience. I support your efforts and look forward to your future postings; longer or more thought-filled short ones. I can see many more elements to your creative mind. Tony
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