All Comments on 'A Honeymoon Affair'

Imagine the same scene without the pretext of being a newly wed.... same results but a much better story the way you did it... My compliments

From one old fart to another ( assuming you are about 60) that is one hell of a story. A tight new bride, who apparently has some experience, and although you did not say so ... maybe a secret desire to fuck a father figure. But hey if our new role this late in life to to fulfill a young ladies fantasy .. why not ??

You need to continue this story so that Jill gets pregnant by you, as she is in her ovulating period, on the first nite of her marriage.

and well written besides. Hope you continue this....

Without a doubt, one of THE hottest stories I have read in a great while. I wouldn't change a thing.

I especially loved how you included the mental aspects at the beginning instead of just having him jump into bed with her. Sexy as hell!

for me, it's all about the leadup, and yours is perfect. Thanks, and keep up the good work!

Yessss......she needs to get pregnant by you on the night of her wedding, with the two of you continuing your affair without her new hubby knowing it. Perhaps you can continue to fuck her and give this first baby several full-blooded siblings as well.....Very, very erotic!

write more.. you are a great writer of sex..

is so utterly hot...

For some, maturity means wrinkles and gray hair. In real life it means knowing what to do and how to exchange pleasure. You did a good job demonstrating how experience can lure and fulfill youth in a mutually beneficial manner.

Well done you awful awful man! :)

whispers...."fuck me"...

I loved this,it brought back lots of fond memories of my youth when I had several relationships with older men. With age definitley cums experience!

That was such a hot story that you made me all wet. Now I'm going to go play thinking of your story ;)

Don't cut this one off with "The End". Did you keep fucking her and did she get knocked up by you?

That was extremely hot. I loved how he seduced her and made her beg. Sequel please?

That was an amazing story! So well written. The seduction was perfect.

Written well but the character development was shallow.

It made me very hot...now how am I supposed to go to sleep? Damn! I do love older men!

love your use of imagery, your use of sports odds, your sense of seduction

xoxo

One of the best. Thanks from another old guy. tom anon

We need a second part to see if the affair continues

great story. My best mate fucked my young wife while i watched, unable to stop them. He is very well endowed, which i am not and I watched him fuck her better than I have ever done. I have never fucked her without wearing a condom as she cant take the pill but he fucked her bareback. There is a slight twist to this story. We had only been married 10 hours, this was our wedding night !!! Can tell the whole story if anyone is interested.

Yeah I see an annulment