The Contract

i want to read more of this,it reminds me of a relationship i was in many years ago,it was wonderful ,please continue .x

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yes please continue,cant wait to find out her/his fate

Oh the is definitely needs to be continued. Loved it.

Just terrible

Even for fiction. Not a single lawyer on earth would write up such an agreement. No man, anywhere, would agree to the terms. Something about pride and self respect. And if Ms. Mctier went around acting in the manner you portray, she'd be 6 foot under.
This mess lacks any type of imaginative or clever writing. It created nothing interesting or entertaining. The characters were so thoroughly disgusting and unlikeable that it was impossible to care about what they did. Just plain awful story.

Another technical point

Slavery is ILLEGAL, that's why no lawyer would do the contract. For Christ's sake, it's fantasy. Of course. But there could have been another set-up. Maybe a good author could have dreamed up one.

Author Thick Skin versus negative and stupid comments

The negative people out there...I just have to laugh. First of all, this is fantasy, and being a slave to a dominant woman IS A COMMON FANTASY among submissive men who also cross dress. Secondly, yes it is illegal to own a slave. Read the story. He would be able to walk away ANY time. The contract was really about asset transferral. He could walk away a free man, but without his money. The benefit TO BOTH OF THEM, was that she wanted a slave, and he wanted to be one. The money was unimportant to BOTH of them. This story is about role play and the dangers of fantasy swaying someone to do an outrageous and stupid thing. Lighten up stupid people.

Promising start!

Please continue! To the naysayers: relax, it's just a little fantasy! And you might do better reading stories more to your own tastes.

Yes

Yes ,yes ,yes. Love the start of this story. Hope she gets put in ballet boots and forced to smoke. Mmmm