So we are supposed to buy into the fact that his wife beat up his arch nemesis and that erases the conscious decision wifey made to cheat on the marriage. It just doesn't hold water. Decently edited but that's about it.
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Anonymous02/01/17
WHAT THE FUCK- BuzzCzar
HELLO! HELLO! THINK, McFLY! THINK! It makes no sense to you, because you are an actual fucking retard, plus your intelligence level is the same as a 1st grader. Its a classic curveball at the end stupid; I guarantee that anybody who read this story, thought a man beat the shit out of that woman. When Rosie's husband realizes it was her that actually did it, he also realized that if she would do that to the bitch who caused their martial problem then she would definitely do anything to fight for their marriage. In the real world, things like this can possibly happen numb-nuts.
Good character development, especially the office bitch. Good originality and surprises throughout.
A nice respite from the typical cheating spouse story.
Nicely written.
While the bitch at work got what was coming, the husband did not. The wife fell into a trap that I believe should have been exposed for further retaliation on the bitch at work. I do like asswipes no matter what gender. Thanks for the twist at the end.
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Anonymous02/03/17
5* plus
Great story and you had me right until the ending thinking that the kid stud did the dirty on the work bitch. Hey I worked with bitches like that and a lot of women that would never think that way but, she got what she deserved and she should get more from the husband at least professionally. It makes sense that the bitch's assailant was a woman since a man kneeing her in the crouch over and over would have done permanent damage and slamming her face into the pavement would have fractured her skull. Dam straight he would go back to his wife after she proved to him that she was going to fight to save their family. This is one of the best stories on this site and I look forward to reading more from this author - THANKS
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Anonymous02/03/17
Liked All But The Easy Wife
Story depends on us either believing anybody actually has Magic Powers or we have to overlook that Rosie really did make a choice. The old "I fell on his dick" thing.
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Anonymous02/04/17
Well written, but...
He was a fool to rejoin his wife. First, the photos showed no evidence she did not enjoy the fuck ing she got at the gym. Second, she showed no remorse for her cheating until her husband confronted her. Finally, she did no come forward...her husband confronted her with irrefutable evidence. She' s a cheater who regretted getting caught far more than fucking her husband's coworker. He's a fool to believe she won't cheat again.
Sorry I don't like RAAC story. Yours is a nice tale but she barely faced any consequences for her actions and did no heavy lifting to win her husband back.
Another weak male and by now it's pretty obvious all your heroes are like that. Love is not an excuse to act like a wimp.
Interesting story where the wife cheater Burns-The-Bitch. Very original and creative. However when the wife says that you know I'm not a cheater....I just screwed the guy because he was very sad????? She is a cheater. Did not like the reconciliation. Thanks for the story.
English
5 stars
to offset the asshole of lIt's 1 vote!!!
Makes no sense
So we are supposed to buy into the fact that his wife beat up his arch nemesis and that erases the conscious decision wifey made to cheat on the marriage. It just doesn't hold water. Decently edited but that's about it.
WHAT THE FUCK- BuzzCzar
HELLO! HELLO! THINK, McFLY! THINK! It makes no sense to you, because you are an actual fucking retard, plus your intelligence level is the same as a 1st grader. Its a classic curveball at the end stupid; I guarantee that anybody who read this story, thought a man beat the shit out of that woman. When Rosie's husband realizes it was her that actually did it, he also realized that if she would do that to the bitch who caused their martial problem then she would definitely do anything to fight for their marriage. In the real world, things like this can possibly happen numb-nuts.
Liked it
Good character development, especially the office bitch. Good originality and surprises throughout.
A nice respite from the typical cheating spouse story.
Nicely written.
I liked it
While the bitch at work got what was coming, the husband did not. The wife fell into a trap that I believe should have been exposed for further retaliation on the bitch at work. I do like asswipes no matter what gender. Thanks for the twist at the end.
5* plus
Great story and you had me right until the ending thinking that the kid stud did the dirty on the work bitch. Hey I worked with bitches like that and a lot of women that would never think that way but, she got what she deserved and she should get more from the husband at least professionally. It makes sense that the bitch's assailant was a woman since a man kneeing her in the crouch over and over would have done permanent damage and slamming her face into the pavement would have fractured her skull. Dam straight he would go back to his wife after she proved to him that she was going to fight to save their family. This is one of the best stories on this site and I look forward to reading more from this author - THANKS
Liked All But The Easy Wife
Story depends on us either believing anybody actually has Magic Powers or we have to overlook that Rosie really did make a choice. The old "I fell on his dick" thing.
Well written, but...
He was a fool to rejoin his wife. First, the photos showed no evidence she did not enjoy the fuck ing she got at the gym. Second, she showed no remorse for her cheating until her husband confronted her. Finally, she did no come forward...her husband confronted her with irrefutable evidence. She' s a cheater who regretted getting caught far more than fucking her husband's coworker. He's a fool to believe she won't cheat again.
RAAC -2
Original. 5*
The wife doing the BTB. Awesome!!!
Nice story but RAAC
Sorry I don't like RAAC story. Yours is a nice tale but she barely faced any consequences for her actions and did no heavy lifting to win her husband back.
Another weak male and by now it's pretty obvious all your heroes are like that. Love is not an excuse to act like a wimp.
A Cheater Is A Cheater Is A Cheater!
Interesting story where the wife cheater Burns-The-Bitch. Very original and creative. However when the wife says that you know I'm not a cheater....I just screwed the guy because he was very sad????? She is a cheater. Did not like the reconciliation. Thanks for the story.
Pathetic
No your ending does not follow your story's plot and characterizations.
Great story
Didn't see where you were going with this story in the first chapter so I didn't even give you a score. Loved your ending and worthy of a 5*
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