I'm convinced that a second transgression won't occur and I'm satisfied with the destruction of his enemy. Sometimes all an opponent needs is a good sound brutal beating to make a guy feel better... a juicy salary increase doesn't hurt either.
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Anonymous11/14/14
A little disappointed
You could have done so much more with your fantastic setup in Pt. 01. I have to admit being a little disappointed, but overall still a very good read. It should be a >4 story, but I have a feeling your gonna get hammered once the scores start pouring in.
some of this i liked. but his wife is still a fucking idiot. he still owes the bitch something to.
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Anonymous11/14/14
Part 1 was much better
With this we get a run of the mill revenge story. Unsurprising (did anyone not guess it was the wife?), and not erotic. 5 stars in part 1, 2 stars for this.
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Anonymous11/14/14
Goes beyond a limit of belief
Something about these stories where the wife is so naive or so stupid she'd forget to breathe if someone didn't remind her, stretch the limit of belief to the point you just got to say HEY, STUPID SHE DID IT. No matter how you spin it she spread for another guy for no good reason other than he was really good looking and told her what she wanted to hear. The definition of cheating. Did you really sign up to be married to, maybe not the easiest spread in town, but someone so close you really can never trust out of your sight again. That's what you're married to?!?! If she ever by chance meets Brad Pitt petting a puppy in the park will she be so hormonally impaired, the mother of your children, that she'll be peeling off her panties in a heart beat?
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Anonymous11/14/14
Fantastic
Fantastic! The ending caught me completely by surprise, I had given no consideration that the attacker was the demure wife Rosie. "Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned."
while not entirely RAAC its almost there, srsly she cheated without the "excuse" of being drugged or drunk. Now you have a srs moral dilemma involving law enforcement which the husband suddenly and quite conveniently forgets about. While I do applaud she's "fighting" for her marriage where was this fight when she was being "seduced"?
"I fucking can't stand that bitch. In fact, I've been trying to figure out how to beat the shit out of her myself without getting pinched, but I know she'd nail me if I did. I'm pretty sure she'd nail you too if you tried to get even. She's a fucking schemer and the cunt's got all her bases covered." - Or he could have told him that she was gonna blackmail him and im pretty sure he would have thought of something considering that the husband is suppose to be "intelligent" but again I see how this is a plot device for reconciliation
Usually we can see the twist coming from miles away. Not this time. Kudos.
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Anonymous11/14/14
Rosie's pov
This was good, but I was really hoping for Rosie's pov on the seduction, descriptively what happened and her thoughts and feelings as she was giving in and fucking him.
I dont usually attack other users but your comment just made me smh, if you really couldnt see this a mile away after putting together the fact that the seducer didnt do it and neither did the husband it stands to reason the wife did. It would have been more of a surprise if anyone but the wife did it
five stars. This was a well developed storyline that was definitely not cookie cutter by any stretch. I assume this is the end. Yes, there are still unanswered questions. But part of the allure of this story was the unexpected. How did Devin get to his wife? How did she manage to carry out the attack against Teri? The author gives us some insight, but leaves a bit to the imagination. We don't need a part three that tells her story. We know she was seduced. We know she is sorrowful. We probably know she would never do it again. We know she is angry about what was perpetrated against her. Did she redeem herself? I'm not sure. Her actions cannot absolve her of her responsibility in her getting fucked. But I am fine with a bit of mystery at the end. It is in keeping with the rest of the story. They probably work things out. I'm fine with that.
novel approach, a new way to gain reconciliation. thanks for the story. hope you add a chapter just for Rosie. how she felt. how she reached the decision to beat the stuffings out of Torrie. thanks for a great story
He fucked up by engaging in a stupid office war with a stupid bitch. Worse, he escalated the situation when he turned it personal by turning the seducer lose. When it turned around on him, he didn't like it. Of course his wife screwed up, a bit too easily to be understood. Nobody is that good a seducer that they are irresistible. The dead wife story, was also lame and clearly bullshit. She fucked because she wanted to fuck. The fact is, no one was a decent moral person in this story. They were all more than a little fucked up and they all got what they deserved. For people of their age and station in life they all should have known better. The only real reason to stay married, other than for the benefit of the kids was because they were all such shitty people they are better off together.
The conclusion (and RAAC) were obvious from the start of part 2.
I'm disappointed in myself for even finishing this drivel, when it was such a foregone conclusion. But based on your previous work I was willing to give you the benefit of the doubt.
Oh well, my stupid.
Hopefully you will have grown your balls back before you try to write again.
the right one figured it out.
It is too bad she didn't give the serial seducer a proper sendoff too.
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Anonymous11/14/14
A Great Read!
Thank you for the great story. I enjoyed it immensely and was sorry it was over. I figured that Rosie was involved with the beating but thought she had some clandestine relatives who did the job for her. What a nice surprise.
I get a chuckle out of the BTB crowd and the ones who throw around RAC as a bad thing. The BTB crowd is the same crowd as RAC crowd. They are just trying to put themselves at a distance from the poor connotation that BTB crowd gives to normal people. I don't know why they don't realize that life is full of greys. If they think every situation is black and white, and deserves wrath and broken homes, then I feel sorry for their sons, daughters and wives, and yes, for them too.
She was deduced by a stranger into having sex, really? So what happens to the next guy who loses his wife? Will she comfort him also?
I know this story could end here, but I hope it doesnt, because I'm hoping Rosie can explain that it took a few weeks of seduction and not just one visit for her to end up with Devin! Would also like to see Teri's reaction to being transferred and Grant getting her job!
Agree that this is moving in the right direction. While the infidelity was bad what would be worse would be Teri winning, that is breaking the marriage permanently.
Agree with other comments that another chapter to tie up the loose ends is needed.
To spoil the outcome but didn't she just fall for an obvious line and then effectively seduce her dopey husband into forgiving her? Is this guy a lamebrain or what?
I do not believe that a person who so willingly and easily went to bed didn't do so with at least some regard for wanting to and could/would do it again in the future just as easily if the right circumstances were to present themselves. Most likely even easier than the first because the ice has been broken. This is turning, sadly, into the Hatfields and McCoys.
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Anonymous11/14/14
I don't see why....
he couldn't have signed the legal separation agreement (that he already paid for), talked to Rosie about counseling, and STILL worked on the marriage, eventually preventing divorce. In counseling, many of the obscured truths would have been made much clearer. Positive communication would become more emphasized. And she would have to face just why it was that she was so EASY to seduce. Perhaps she would be given emotional tools to help prevent future problems. Funny, If Grant HADN'T reacted so strongly and swiftly, in both confrontation and departure, would Rosie REALLY have learned anything???
If he had passively accepted her betrayal, then TERI wouldn't have learned anything either, and then things would never have improved on the job.
One more thing, I DON'T think that the police would have been so quick to dismiss a female as a potential suspect. Just saying...
I'm not against reconcilliation here in this case, especially with young kids involved, but this problem IS bigger than the both of them, and to truly heal, they have to admit that they need help. That said, he shouldn't be too eager to move back home, and protecting himself legally WAS a savy move. I thought his actions were all well on point UNTIL he decided NOT to sign; but even worse with zero mention of counseling or any other theraputic remedies.
JTJ, was there more to come, or was this supposed to be just two chapters? I'm afraid that if this IS all, then perhaps this story won't be quite as successful as anticipated. Oh well, I'll still thank you for the contribution, and will be more than happy to read the next one.
Against all I agree with @lance_spearman...It's a good story and the author found a good way to save the marriage...We are all humans, we make mistakes soon or later, but what distinguishes a good person from a bad one, is that a good person learns from the mistake...She did...He too, because he was a guilty one too, as the lover boy told him...
I think that mischievous smile and proud boast about some bitch getting her ass soundly kicked for her evil deed.... I think that really does, by itself, goes a long way to convincing me to believing that she's probably just stupid, as her husband said; but that, all evidence to the contrary, she's not a premeditated cheater, as a character...
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Anonymous11/14/14
Wow
Great story, I didn't even think it was a female who put the Queen bitch in the hospital. Enjoyed your story! Thanks for writing and sharing. Awesome!
It was well written and we had a new plot. Readers have no idea how much time and effort writers put into thinking about plots and wanting to do something different than the standard, "She cheats. he catches her. makes her and lover suffer, and divorces her" story. This was interesting and different and that is worth a great deal. Thanks for the imagination and hard work!
Violence is always the 'easy' answer and sometimes the appropriate one .Not so much in this case . The story begged for one last faceoff with Teri and the narrator. But the story raised fantastic complications in terms of how to deal with female agendaist with control issues. The beatdown didn't resolve that. Did battering another woman solve the issue of Rosy being so gullible to fall for any stud with a sob story?.
I give the author credit for conceiving the fascinating office sexual politics plot but hope other writers will take up the challenge of how to reach a more credible conclusions with with less contusions.
Its becoming very rare to read a story in this genre that makes me nod my head and think "Great story". This definitely was worth the read. It ended perfectly. I don't feel like we need to go through the counseling and the anger to see them live happily ever after. This ending was enough for me. Excellent job.
I usually dislike RAAC, but fell in love with Rosie when she beat the tar out of the wicked witch. As HDK said, this is a great series - original and new. My father had a saying, "never underestimate the power of a woman," and Rosie is a woman not to be underestimated. Well done!
For his wife to succumb so easily to Devin was a stretch She willingly engaged in conversation, and fell for a ridiculous sob story, then plied by drink felt sorry for him and betrayed her marriage, oh come on. That is so not plausible, unless Rosie really wanted to cheat. She didn't let it happen, she made a conscious choice.
In fact, how did Rosie and Devin even meet??? Was it a dinner a lunch? How does a mother of two meet a man outside of marriage, spend a short time talking and end up in a hotel room her face full of rapture??? Where were the kids, where was her loving husband???
Plausible? I don't think so. Read her words carefully. Her excuse is so flimsy, it simply doesn't add up.
I enjoy good reconciliation stories, but this left a bad taste in my mouth. I fully expected when Devin was getting the shit kicked out of him, that he would have mentioned he drugged her. But nope, she went willingly, and as hubby said, "You let it happen because you wanted to fuck someone other than your husband and you ended up fucking both of us."
She certainly did.
Him blaming himself because of his actions regarding Teri is ludicrous. No one, no one forced his loving wife to spread her legs, and fuck another man.
The ending is sufficient I guess, but I wonder if this marriage could survive? Would Teri seek more revenge, it is in her nature to do so. I would be curious what the author thinks would happen. Yes Rosie beat the shit out of Teri, but what if? What if Teri was used by Rosie too? Rosie the "loving wife" is ruthless too, the beat down proves that. What if the reason Rosie kicked the shit out of Teri was because she unwittingly exposed Rosie's philandering? What if Rosie isn't who hubby thinks she was? What if Rosie is indeed a serial cheater?
Maz
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Anonymous11/14/14
He is the wimp and Rosie is the man.
Now that is what I call a women standing up for herself! Teri is still alive ang going to make hell on another deptment .the story goes on. I still can't see how Rosie could sucuum to that wominezier with that weak story and drop her pants, more information is needed.so I guess I hope justhe janitor writes this up and why would the company keep such a employee. You can't tell. Me upper mgmt doesnot what is going on.
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Anonymous11/14/14
This story can't be over ,too much is left out
Rosie being suduced so easily leaves a lot of questions unanswered . Terri is coming back and will seek revenge on him . The beat goes on. So Rosie defended her home by using a violent attack on Terri . We'll need more chapters to see how this al plays out!
These super fast reconciliation stories are just to unbelievable and to be honest JTJ, your are far to good a writer to be using them. Rosie is a cheating tramp and her beating the crap out of Teri doesn't alter that fact. Teri may have pointed the asshole she fucked at her but it was Rosie who willingly spread her legs for him at the drop of a hat. And all the fighting for her marriage talk posted below is just bullshit folks as once she let Devlin fuck her the first time, it was way to late for any fight and no marriage to fight for.
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Anonymous11/14/14
Too obvious
Devin was just too much of a wimp to be considered a serious suspect. Like he said, he just wanted out. And given what an investigation must have turned up at work, his Boss certainly would have known that he and Teri had an adversarial relationship, one or both of them would have gotten canned. And just because his wife kicked the shit out of Teri doesn't change the fact that she was a cheater. If the mythical Devin could talk her out of her panties, what's to stop the next lothario? She simply can't be trusted. And you don't think the cops would look at her? Even if they didn't think her capable, they would have asked the questions and looked to see if she hired someone. Too many holes in this mess to give it a good rating. Thanks for the effort. Maybe next time?
Holy fuck!!!' I mean, sweet mother of God, that was fantastic!!!
I'm not a fan of cheating wife stories or about retarded women justifying their adultery and their husbands falling for their bullshit; but this? Wow! How I the fuck can he say no to a woman like that. A woman who beat the fuck out of a bitch so bad much that no one knew it was her...and she didn't even feel the bite until after!
Well done sir, it deserved all 5 stars and more.
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Anonymous11/14/14
To All the Haters
It's only a story, and a good one at that. I agree that we probably need more. If every story was a BTB, they'd get really boring, and I, and I'm sure others would stop logging on and reading same old, same old. And by the way, I believe that those that are so hell bent on physically and emotionally harming the errant wife and lover, would probably be the biggest cowards if faced with a similar situation themselves. It has been my experience that the loudest talkers are often the meekest actors. You can't help who you love, and you can't help how much you love them. So often in the stories in this category, the betrayed husband is the most emotionally harmed and miserable of the characters. If he loves her enough that he's so miserable without her, how does he profit by harming her and throwing her out permanently? Maybe taking a chance on the repenting wife is what's really best for him. After all, each marriage is just one slip away from being on the rocks, whether it's the first time, or again, when the partner falls.
There was maybe a bit too little thought given to the infidelity in the middle. He invested so much more thought in his office rival (not without reason) that it didn't end up feeling like his marriage or kids were first priority in his life...or that he was too upset by the betrayal. I also cringe whenever a LW character storms out of the house after learning the truth...courts can and sometimes do use that as evidence that you recognize the wife as the primary caregiver and have no interest in the family home.
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Anonymous11/14/14
Holy fuck!!!' I mean, sweet mother of God, that was so fucked up!!!
Why woman a man want a women that fucked some dumb ass for comfort. What's next she going to fuck the mailman because it's cold.
English
I Like It
I'm convinced that a second transgression won't occur and I'm satisfied with the destruction of his enemy. Sometimes all an opponent needs is a good sound brutal beating to make a guy feel better... a juicy salary increase doesn't hurt either.
A little disappointed
You could have done so much more with your fantastic setup in Pt. 01. I have to admit being a little disappointed, but overall still a very good read. It should be a >4 story, but I have a feeling your gonna get hammered once the scores start pouring in.
ok
some of this i liked. but his wife is still a fucking idiot. he still owes the bitch something to.
Part 1 was much better
With this we get a run of the mill revenge story. Unsurprising (did anyone not guess it was the wife?), and not erotic. 5 stars in part 1, 2 stars for this.
Goes beyond a limit of belief
Something about these stories where the wife is so naive or so stupid she'd forget to breathe if someone didn't remind her, stretch the limit of belief to the point you just got to say HEY, STUPID SHE DID IT. No matter how you spin it she spread for another guy for no good reason other than he was really good looking and told her what she wanted to hear. The definition of cheating. Did you really sign up to be married to, maybe not the easiest spread in town, but someone so close you really can never trust out of your sight again. That's what you're married to?!?! If she ever by chance meets Brad Pitt petting a puppy in the park will she be so hormonally impaired, the mother of your children, that she'll be peeling off her panties in a heart beat?
Fantastic
Fantastic! The ending caught me completely by surprise, I had given no consideration that the attacker was the demure wife Rosie. "Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned."
Fun Story *****
I don't get the criticism. Fun read. 5 Stars.
Almost RAAC
while not entirely RAAC its almost there, srsly she cheated without the "excuse" of being drugged or drunk. Now you have a srs moral dilemma involving law enforcement which the husband suddenly and quite conveniently forgets about. While I do applaud she's "fighting" for her marriage where was this fight when she was being "seduced"?
"I fucking can't stand that bitch. In fact, I've been trying to figure out how to beat the shit out of her myself without getting pinched, but I know she'd nail me if I did. I'm pretty sure she'd nail you too if you tried to get even. She's a fucking schemer and the cunt's got all her bases covered." - Or he could have told him that she was gonna blackmail him and im pretty sure he would have thought of something considering that the husband is suppose to be "intelligent" but again I see how this is a plot device for reconciliation
Nice touch
Usually we can see the twist coming from miles away. Not this time. Kudos.
Rosie's pov
This was good, but I was really hoping for Rosie's pov on the seduction, descriptively what happened and her thoughts and feelings as she was giving in and fucking him.
dmhack
I dont usually attack other users but your comment just made me smh, if you really couldnt see this a mile away after putting together the fact that the seducer didnt do it and neither did the husband it stands to reason the wife did. It would have been more of a surprise if anyone but the wife did it
Loved it
five stars. This was a well developed storyline that was definitely not cookie cutter by any stretch. I assume this is the end. Yes, there are still unanswered questions. But part of the allure of this story was the unexpected. How did Devin get to his wife? How did she manage to carry out the attack against Teri? The author gives us some insight, but leaves a bit to the imagination. We don't need a part three that tells her story. We know she was seduced. We know she is sorrowful. We probably know she would never do it again. We know she is angry about what was perpetrated against her. Did she redeem herself? I'm not sure. Her actions cannot absolve her of her responsibility in her getting fucked. But I am fine with a bit of mystery at the end. It is in keeping with the rest of the story. They probably work things out. I'm fine with that.
One thing is for sure. The quality of this piece puts the author in very good company. Best you've done yet, and one of the finest I have ever read.
DYNAMITE CUMS IN SMALL PACKAGES
and never face up to a female protecting her den. TK U MLJ LV NV
Short and sweet
Nice job JTJ. Glad to see something a little different even if you could see it coming from a mile away.
novel approach
novel approach, a new way to gain reconciliation. thanks for the story. hope you add a chapter just for Rosie. how she felt. how she reached the decision to beat the stuffings out of Torrie. thanks for a great story
Completely taken off guard!
There aren't a whole lot of surprises in this genre anymore, but you got me on this one. Well done!
Wow 5
He fucked up by engaging in a stupid office war with a stupid bitch. Worse, he escalated the situation when he turned it personal by turning the seducer lose. When it turned around on him, he didn't like it. Of course his wife screwed up, a bit too easily to be understood. Nobody is that good a seducer that they are irresistible. The dead wife story, was also lame and clearly bullshit. She fucked because she wanted to fuck. The fact is, no one was a decent moral person in this story. They were all more than a little fucked up and they all got what they deserved. For people of their age and station in life they all should have known better. The only real reason to stay married, other than for the benefit of the kids was because they were all such shitty people they are better off together.
Well written stuff
But pretty pedestrian. Certainly didn't live up to the potential of the first chapter.
Obvious
The conclusion (and RAAC) were obvious from the start of part 2.
I'm disappointed in myself for even finishing this drivel, when it was such a foregone conclusion. But based on your previous work I was willing to give you the benefit of the doubt.
Oh well, my stupid.
Hopefully you will have grown your balls back before you try to write again.
of the four
the right one figured it out.
It is too bad she didn't give the serial seducer a proper sendoff too.
A Great Read!
Thank you for the great story. I enjoyed it immensely and was sorry it was over. I figured that Rosie was involved with the beating but thought she had some clandestine relatives who did the job for her. What a nice surprise.
I get a chuckle out of the BTB crowd and the ones who throw around RAC as a bad thing. The BTB crowd is the same crowd as RAC crowd. They are just trying to put themselves at a distance from the poor connotation that BTB crowd gives to normal people. I don't know why they don't realize that life is full of greys. If they think every situation is black and white, and deserves wrath and broken homes, then I feel sorry for their sons, daughters and wives, and yes, for them too.
Enjoyed it but
She was deduced by a stranger into having sex, really? So what happens to the next guy who loses his wife? Will she comfort him also?
I know this story could end here, but I hope it doesnt, because I'm hoping Rosie can explain that it took a few weeks of seduction and not just one visit for her to end up with Devin! Would also like to see Teri's reaction to being transferred and Grant getting her job!
good stuff
Agree that this is moving in the right direction. While the infidelity was bad what would be worse would be Teri winning, that is breaking the marriage permanently.
Agree with other comments that another chapter to tie up the loose ends is needed.
Good story
And no, I don't think it needs more.
CORRECTION: Enjoyed the story, but
She was SEDUCED by a stranger into having sex, really?
Far be it for me
To spoil the outcome but didn't she just fall for an obvious line and then effectively seduce her dopey husband into forgiving her? Is this guy a lamebrain or what?
I do not believe that a person who so willingly and easily went to bed didn't do so with at least some regard for wanting to and could/would do it again in the future just as easily if the right circumstances were to present themselves. Most likely even easier than the first because the ice has been broken. This is turning, sadly, into the Hatfields and McCoys.
I don't see why....
he couldn't have signed the legal separation agreement (that he already paid for), talked to Rosie about counseling, and STILL worked on the marriage, eventually preventing divorce. In counseling, many of the obscured truths would have been made much clearer. Positive communication would become more emphasized. And she would have to face just why it was that she was so EASY to seduce. Perhaps she would be given emotional tools to help prevent future problems. Funny, If Grant HADN'T reacted so strongly and swiftly, in both confrontation and departure, would Rosie REALLY have learned anything???
If he had passively accepted her betrayal, then TERI wouldn't have learned anything either, and then things would never have improved on the job.
One more thing, I DON'T think that the police would have been so quick to dismiss a female as a potential suspect. Just saying...
I'm not against reconcilliation here in this case, especially with young kids involved, but this problem IS bigger than the both of them, and to truly heal, they have to admit that they need help. That said, he shouldn't be too eager to move back home, and protecting himself legally WAS a savy move. I thought his actions were all well on point UNTIL he decided NOT to sign; but even worse with zero mention of counseling or any other theraputic remedies.
JTJ, was there more to come, or was this supposed to be just two chapters? I'm afraid that if this IS all, then perhaps this story won't be quite as successful as anticipated. Oh well, I'll still thank you for the contribution, and will be more than happy to read the next one.
Against all I agree with @lance_spearman...
Against all I agree with @lance_spearman...It's a good story and the author found a good way to save the marriage...We are all humans, we make mistakes soon or later, but what distinguishes a good person from a bad one, is that a good person learns from the mistake...She did...He too, because he was a guilty one too, as the lover boy told him...
I like that little twist at the end there
I think that mischievous smile and proud boast about some bitch getting her ass soundly kicked for her evil deed.... I think that really does, by itself, goes a long way to convincing me to believing that she's probably just stupid, as her husband said; but that, all evidence to the contrary, she's not a premeditated cheater, as a character...
Wow
Great story, I didn't even think it was a female who put the Queen bitch in the hospital. Enjoyed your story! Thanks for writing and sharing. Awesome!
This story deserves high marks.
It was well written and we had a new plot. Readers have no idea how much time and effort writers put into thinking about plots and wanting to do something different than the standard, "She cheats. he catches her. makes her and lover suffer, and divorces her" story. This was interesting and different and that is worth a great deal. Thanks for the imagination and hard work!
3 stars
good read
Started like a pro, ended like a amauter
Violence is always the 'easy' answer and sometimes the appropriate one .Not so much in this case . The story begged for one last faceoff with Teri and the narrator. But the story raised fantastic complications in terms of how to deal with female agendaist with control issues. The beatdown didn't resolve that. Did battering another woman solve the issue of Rosy being so gullible to fall for any stud with a sob story?.
I give the author credit for conceiving the fascinating office sexual politics plot but hope other writers will take up the challenge of how to reach a more credible conclusions with with less contusions.
Excellent.
Its becoming very rare to read a story in this genre that makes me nod my head and think "Great story". This definitely was worth the read. It ended perfectly. I don't feel like we need to go through the counseling and the anger to see them live happily ever after. This ending was enough for me. Excellent job.
to Lord Slammdawg
What is an amauter?
shall i say
surprising end
Rosie, you rock! Go girl, go!
I usually dislike RAAC, but fell in love with Rosie when she beat the tar out of the wicked witch. As HDK said, this is a great series - original and new. My father had a saying, "never underestimate the power of a woman," and Rosie is a woman not to be underestimated. Well done!
I liked it, but...
For his wife to succumb so easily to Devin was a stretch She willingly engaged in conversation, and fell for a ridiculous sob story, then plied by drink felt sorry for him and betrayed her marriage, oh come on. That is so not plausible, unless Rosie really wanted to cheat. She didn't let it happen, she made a conscious choice.
In fact, how did Rosie and Devin even meet??? Was it a dinner a lunch? How does a mother of two meet a man outside of marriage, spend a short time talking and end up in a hotel room her face full of rapture??? Where were the kids, where was her loving husband???
Plausible? I don't think so. Read her words carefully. Her excuse is so flimsy, it simply doesn't add up.
I enjoy good reconciliation stories, but this left a bad taste in my mouth. I fully expected when Devin was getting the shit kicked out of him, that he would have mentioned he drugged her. But nope, she went willingly, and as hubby said, "You let it happen because you wanted to fuck someone other than your husband and you ended up fucking both of us."
She certainly did.
Him blaming himself because of his actions regarding Teri is ludicrous. No one, no one forced his loving wife to spread her legs, and fuck another man.
The ending is sufficient I guess, but I wonder if this marriage could survive? Would Teri seek more revenge, it is in her nature to do so. I would be curious what the author thinks would happen. Yes Rosie beat the shit out of Teri, but what if? What if Teri was used by Rosie too? Rosie the "loving wife" is ruthless too, the beat down proves that. What if the reason Rosie kicked the shit out of Teri was because she unwittingly exposed Rosie's philandering? What if Rosie isn't who hubby thinks she was? What if Rosie is indeed a serial cheater?
Maz
He is the wimp and Rosie is the man.
Now that is what I call a women standing up for herself! Teri is still alive ang going to make hell on another deptment .the story goes on. I still can't see how Rosie could sucuum to that wominezier with that weak story and drop her pants, more information is needed.so I guess I hope justhe janitor writes this up and why would the company keep such a employee. You can't tell. Me upper mgmt doesnot what is going on.
This story can't be over ,too much is left out
Rosie being suduced so easily leaves a lot of questions unanswered . Terri is coming back and will seek revenge on him . The beat goes on. So Rosie defended her home by using a violent attack on Terri . We'll need more chapters to see how this al plays out!
very dissapointing
These super fast reconciliation stories are just to unbelievable and to be honest JTJ, your are far to good a writer to be using them. Rosie is a cheating tramp and her beating the crap out of Teri doesn't alter that fact. Teri may have pointed the asshole she fucked at her but it was Rosie who willingly spread her legs for him at the drop of a hat. And all the fighting for her marriage talk posted below is just bullshit folks as once she let Devlin fuck her the first time, it was way to late for any fight and no marriage to fight for.
Too obvious
Devin was just too much of a wimp to be considered a serious suspect. Like he said, he just wanted out. And given what an investigation must have turned up at work, his Boss certainly would have known that he and Teri had an adversarial relationship, one or both of them would have gotten canned. And just because his wife kicked the shit out of Teri doesn't change the fact that she was a cheater. If the mythical Devin could talk her out of her panties, what's to stop the next lothario? She simply can't be trusted. And you don't think the cops would look at her? Even if they didn't think her capable, they would have asked the questions and looked to see if she hired someone. Too many holes in this mess to give it a good rating. Thanks for the effort. Maybe next time?
Holy fuck!!!' I mean, sweet mother of God, that was fantastic!!!
I'm not a fan of cheating wife stories or about retarded women justifying their adultery and their husbands falling for their bullshit; but this? Wow! How I the fuck can he say no to a woman like that. A woman who beat the fuck out of a bitch so bad much that no one knew it was her...and she didn't even feel the bite until after!
Well done sir, it deserved all 5 stars and more.
To All the Haters
It's only a story, and a good one at that. I agree that we probably need more. If every story was a BTB, they'd get really boring, and I, and I'm sure others would stop logging on and reading same old, same old. And by the way, I believe that those that are so hell bent on physically and emotionally harming the errant wife and lover, would probably be the biggest cowards if faced with a similar situation themselves. It has been my experience that the loudest talkers are often the meekest actors. You can't help who you love, and you can't help how much you love them. So often in the stories in this category, the betrayed husband is the most emotionally harmed and miserable of the characters. If he loves her enough that he's so miserable without her, how does he profit by harming her and throwing her out permanently? Maybe taking a chance on the repenting wife is what's really best for him. After all, each marriage is just one slip away from being on the rocks, whether it's the first time, or again, when the partner falls.
Part 3 ?
Well written. This couple still has a lot to worK out, after the passions of discovery and absence have been quieted.
no it was NOT fantastic
pretty silly .. "I think you know I wasn't ever going to do it again whether I'd been caught or not."
um really?
Liked it
Overall an enjoyable read.
There was maybe a bit too little thought given to the infidelity in the middle. He invested so much more thought in his office rival (not without reason) that it didn't end up feeling like his marriage or kids were first priority in his life...or that he was too upset by the betrayal. I also cringe whenever a LW character storms out of the house after learning the truth...courts can and sometimes do use that as evidence that you recognize the wife as the primary caregiver and have no interest in the family home.
Holy fuck!!!' I mean, sweet mother of God, that was so fucked up!!!
Why woman a man want a women that fucked some dumb ass for comfort. What's next she going to fuck the mailman because it's cold.
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