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Message of forginess and hope
What a wonderful story. I love it. When you wrote "She smells nice: a soft sweet, spicy, homely scent..." the first though that came to my mind was the smell of gingerbread, and cinnamon. I have to say that Suzie is better than me handling piercing heart comment, me I wouldn't have forgiven Emmy. But they say forgive and forget, so I guess Suzie was able to cope with it. ScattySue, do you think it will be possible for next Christmas to write a followup of this story so we can find out what happen between the two. I'm asking 'cause I'm hoping Suzie will have her cake and eat it too. Because of your story, my day is starting with a smile. 5 stars to you.
You spoil us, your readers!
Oh dear, ScattySue, you do spoil it for reading so many of the other Literotica stories with your quality of writing! Let's hope this is a winner, it certainly should be and in my mind is already.
Yes, a sequel for next Christmas would be rather a good present for your readers, don't you think?
M
while i am not into girl-girl sex stories, i thought that this one was very erotic and sensuous.even though i am a straight male i could emphasize with many of suzys emotions, as i was treated roughly by my supposed 'friends' when i was younger. you wrote a very touching story with a subject matter that many writers shy away from, ie overweight people and the reasons for their sexuality...5*...GOOD JOB SCATTY SUE.
Very nice!
I really loved this story. Sweet, realistic and with some very hot moments. I do think that since this was sharing a memory you kind of owe it to us readers to write us a Suze update - and if Emmy is still in the picture, her as well - I'm sure none of us want to wait a year, maybe a Valentine's story?
Merry Christmas, Sue Seven Stars For You
So warm and sweet. Loved it.
Sue, this is a well written very sweet story, with a little Christmas magic.
I like the Mother Christmas creator, but I still haven't decided if she's magical, or just a nice older lady. A very very nice horny older lady...
Gay Kat.
Thank you.
Just 3 brief pages and you manage to squeeze it all in: And not just the the norms, the lies and the thoughtless chicaneries, but equally the friendship, joy and exuberance: Plus some pretty hot sex :D
I wonder how many confused and hurt young girls YOU are going to be the "Mother Chrismas" for with this story. Not a lot I fear, such are not the majority of readers here on literotica, but surely there will be some, and even some who see the truth of it ;-))
Thank You.
VvV
Casey 1988
Great story I gave the story 5 stars as it was one of the best stories on here. I hope a squeal is happening even if it is not done during the contest. I want this story to win if you haven't won already.
Just what we needed
This story is just what we needed: a warm-hearted Christmas tale with what promises to be a happy outcome for Suze. Thanks, ScattySue.
Sue, what I liked...
...about this story is how well you developed your characters. Revealing the psychology, the complexity of relationships. Then provided Suze and Emmy each an epiphany to begin to understand themselves.
Beautiful story!
I love all your stories,especially as their written in English rather than American.
Love It 😘
I just finished. Then read your comments on your upcoming stories. Can you give a more definite release date for your sequel too A Gift from Mother Christmas.
Fortunate
It comes a time in the journey of life when we all need to have a true friend. We should consider ourselves fortunate to have a friend like Kris, and now I feel the same for Suze. May we all be so blessed.
Great story.
Thanks Sue for another great story. Your characters and stories are relatable and really enjoyable.
Hope your writing muse brings inspiration and more of your writings.
amazing story
this definitely must have a sequel...please do
Fat women's bodies and fat lesbian's bodies are perfect and beautiful the way they are.
Very nice story!
Women's bodies are beautiful, no matter what shape or size they come in. People need to know this, and not shame others because of their body shap/size. Thank you for sharing this story with us!
Turnaround isn't fair play
While Suzie is a sympathetic character, her behavior towards Danny wrt his "little cock" is the same sort of sexual bullying he committed against her. Granted, she didn't commit sexual assault, but as humiliating as his treatment of her, so is his telling his friends about his "little cock" on her instructions. But don't get me wrong - I have zero empathy for Danny, am happy he got put in his place, and really don't think a bully like him should be a teacher.
The second paragraph really got to me. I know how this girl feels, I ask myself the same questions. I'm 30, have known I am a lesbian since I hit puberty and have never felt romantic love from a woman. At this point I'm not sure if I ever will. I have loved other women and they've know it, but something about me turned them away. I'm beginning to think Im unlovable. What's wrong with me?
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