A good enough story. And a story need not have a damn thing to do with the real world. Decent effort.
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Anonymous11/16/14
Sounds like my youthful fantasies.
I liked it. It brought back fond memories of when I was 19 and wanted to peep and grope every female in sight. Nicely written too.
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Anonymous11/17/14
Why Stop
Why stop?
Her top open, pants down. Sucking her nipples, fingering her cunt, and making her cum, why not stick one or all of those hardons in her?
I know I would have dropped a load in her.
Keep writing
Nice Story
This would be very realistic if the guys were much younger as that's how they think and act.
good one...but should have continued further
Its actually a well written story for a newbie.....let him write guys
A good enough story. And a story need not have a damn thing to do with the real world. Decent effort.
Sounds like my youthful fantasies.
I liked it. It brought back fond memories of when I was 19 and wanted to peep and grope every female in sight. Nicely written too.
Why Stop
Why stop?
Her top open, pants down. Sucking her nipples, fingering her cunt, and making her cum, why not stick one or all of those hardons in her?
I know I would have dropped a load in her.
Keep writing
interesting
I liked it and to answer a question posed in a comment - the guys may have 'been younger' in the writers mind; but Literotica has age restraints :(
Is there more???
I enjoyed it. Interesting difference between our world and theirs. I would love to read more.
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