But it didn't have much of a build up to it...and it was a bit short. Other then that, it was pretty good.
This was a nice story but it was rushed and too short.
Xxxxxx
Though too short is better than too long... in a story. Great story though.
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I liked this....
But it didn't have much of a build up to it...and it was a bit short. Other then that, it was pretty good.
I enjoyed it
This was a nice story but it was rushed and too short.
A fun read
Xxxxxx
I agree - too short
Though too short is better than too long... in a story. Great story though.
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