and i doubt that he/she/it could survive long in the general population.
Yes, there is very small segment of people who would find this arousing, but morality aside it is a deviation from the most basic biological imperative to reproduce, at least in my opinion. The mindset appalls me but it is not mine to judge the actions of others, I guess. I don't get to judge but it doesn't follow that it's enlightened to approve or endorse.
I also recognize the huge disconnect between my feelings and the fact that I am reading this stuff. It's my pathology but I tend to read Loving Wives, not for the stated description, but in the hope of finding the occasional jewel where the wife actually loves her husband or the wife/husband who fails but is truly contrite and wants to be restored while taking responsibility for his/her actions.
The mixing of semen stories are certainly NOT that. If they float your boat fine but I will comment on the mindset.
The writing is technically okay but wooden (also my opinion) . You've done more than I in that you have invested yourself and your talents and taken a risk in publishing. For that you should be commended.
Only one mistake...she wasn't a cuckoldress, she was a hot wife whose husband loved to share her...A good story of sharing resumed by what the husband said to the lover. "this could be a fun and exciting interlude for us all if we respected one another at all times!" Respect...the right word...
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Anonymous11/14/14
Yummy!
He should have spent more time cleaning the cum from her pussy. *I* think that is the best part, having my wife sit on my face while all that cum drains and is sucked into my mouth!
"As I got closer I could see that Dave's hand was on my wife's leg just above her knee just where her skirt ended. I got closer, Dave saw me approaching and quickly removed his hand. I rejoined them at the table and sat down taking note that they were both quite flustered."
Loved it :)
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Anonymous11/14/14
So, where did Sue go?
"...Sue said that she was tired, excused herself and left."
Since you didn't state otherwise and since they are from out of town, the logical place for her to go is the hotel room she's sharing with her husband, ya know. the very one the trio goes back to so Dave can fuck the narrator's wife. There's no other mention of her, so are we to believe all of this was happening while she was asleep in same bed while Dave was fucking another woman?
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Anonymous11/14/14
the cucks on here are idiots, this didn't happen.
She wouldn't need to drag hubby around she would leave his cuck ass at home.
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Anonymous11/14/14
just more cuckold crape
When is she goning to have to pay the piper?Sluts also age out. Soon she will be just so much gutter trash.
Hey how about making fell like a man and bring a HOT 20 year old to satisfy! Not some worn out slut that any old dick can get off on.
Great, fun story. I know that it's a fantasy, obviously some here don't. They also haven't read Literotica's description of Loving Wives, but whatever. I'd love for this to happen in my life. As you wrote it, I could picture it. Nice job. Thank you. I can't wait for the sequel.
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Anonymous11/15/14
1*
Just another piece of shit story polluting the loving wives category.
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Anonymous11/15/14
Good Story!
Ignore the nay-sayers and keep writing!
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Anonymous11/15/14
What's with the constant supply of cuckie stories?
How many of you scum bags exist out there? What a waste. Another non-erotic story thrown into loving wives. What's so erotic about wanting to watch your wife fuck another? Way to many of these stories on here already. Come up with something different. Oh, anybody that doesn't like this crap is labeled as a troll or told to be ignored. How fucking original a come back. Go fuck yourself.
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Anonymous11/15/14
Minority Comment
I like it. I'm pretty hetero but nowhere near homophobic. The naughtiness of activities like this is compelling. I don't like "staying between the lines" or other mandates to conform to societal norms. Too predictable. Too repetitious. Vive le difference!
Not a bad little tale for a first submission. I would recommend fleshing out your characters a little more. We know nothing about Dave in this story. He's just a random, faceless, prop. We know nothing about the wife's feelings about being shared, and in fact, she seems to show very little hesitation for throwing herself into this strange situation.
One more critique is that you tend to include too much detail in your descriptions of the actions. When the main character gets up to go to the bathroom, do we need to know that he waited in line, took a piss, washed his hands and dried them with a paper towel? Try to spend more time on emotions and less time on actions.
seekeras, below misses the point when he says this kind of story is a deviation from the most basic biological imperative to reproduce. In fact, it fits perfectly with basic biology, not just to reproduce, but in claiming a woman as your own.
In the good old cave man days, we men would have regularly been fighting it out to win and hold onto our women, with our testosterone flowing freely. These days, with social norms underpinning marriage, we don't have to work anything like so hard, and the testosterone, no longer needed, no longer drives our sex lives as strongly.
By putting another guy into the mix, we re-ignite that cave man drive. There is no clearer way of confirming that your wife is still desired by other guys, or that she is herself sexually open to other men, and needs you to work to keep her, than letting another guy have his way with her.
That puts the onus back on you to fight to hold on to her. The testosterone flows, and you give her the kind of fucking that reclaims her as your own, just as the guy does in the story. Not just straight away, but every time you think about it, every time you picture him fucking her, every time she reminds you of it, and every time you think about or plan to let another guy have his way with her, and make you work to win her back again.
Of course it's risky, but it is true cave man sex, and only a guy confident enough to know that he will keep his wife more satisfied that the competition will want to play.
Nice story. Some good hints in the comments about improving the quality of the writing, but don't be discouraged.
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Anonymous11/17/14
no way
my wife is not a slut as in this tale and I do not share. another chuck tale.
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Anonymous11/18/14
Always a sad perversion . . .
Poor couple. Hope they can stay together once they realize the emptiness of their relationship, and how they used each other so selfishly. Who enjoys reading about such shallow people?
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Anonymous11/18/14
i like it
Have done the same stuff with my wife. You dont know how good it is to see your wife enjoy herself like that untill you try it
What do you two look like, tit size, cock size. Is she petite or tall and big boned? You as well? Hair color. You leave it at she wanting another stranger, will you write more?
I liked the device of having two business associates sit down with the wife. It was a more believable way of introducing a single man when the female associate left. I don't think the wife would have been receptive it a single man had sat down with her without her husband.
Good Tab A into Slot B descriptions of sex. It might have been a little more personal for the reader if there was some dialog. It was hot, but a little detached. Dialog would be a good way of satisfying another commenter who wanted to know what the people looked like. The dialog could show the reader by how the wife and the man reacted to one another verbally.
What made this story go down was: The wife was letting the other man put his hand in her without the approval of her husband while he went to the restroom, and then when the husband agree with that she "looked completely shocked at the idea"? 1*
English
What total rot!
Nothing in this that is worth a positive score.
And still they come
This category is an endless conga line of masochists who want to watch their wives fucked by other men. I guess they have no other outlet.
the guy ain't real....
and i doubt that he/she/it could survive long in the general population.
Yes, there is very small segment of people who would find this arousing, but morality aside it is a deviation from the most basic biological imperative to reproduce, at least in my opinion. The mindset appalls me but it is not mine to judge the actions of others, I guess. I don't get to judge but it doesn't follow that it's enlightened to approve or endorse.
I also recognize the huge disconnect between my feelings and the fact that I am reading this stuff. It's my pathology but I tend to read Loving Wives, not for the stated description, but in the hope of finding the occasional jewel where the wife actually loves her husband or the wife/husband who fails but is truly contrite and wants to be restored while taking responsibility for his/her actions.
The mixing of semen stories are certainly NOT that. If they float your boat fine but I will comment on the mindset.
The writing is technically okay but wooden (also my opinion) . You've done more than I in that you have invested yourself and your talents and taken a risk in publishing. For that you should be commended.
a wonderful 1*
for the new baboon on Cuckerotica
Only one mistake...
Only one mistake...she wasn't a cuckoldress, she was a hot wife whose husband loved to share her...A good story of sharing resumed by what the husband said to the lover. "this could be a fun and exciting interlude for us all if we respected one another at all times!" Respect...the right word...
Yummy!
He should have spent more time cleaning the cum from her pussy. *I* think that is the best part, having my wife sit on my face while all that cum drains and is sucked into my mouth!
Hmm - well I liked it
Hot story. Thanks for writing it. I hope you can ignore the trolls and find a way to write and share more - I would like to read more.
PT Restaurant?
"As I got closer I could see that Dave's hand was on my wife's leg just above her knee just where her skirt ended. I got closer, Dave saw me approaching and quickly removed his hand. I rejoined them at the table and sat down taking note that they were both quite flustered."
Loved it :)
So, where did Sue go?
"...Sue said that she was tired, excused herself and left."
Since you didn't state otherwise and since they are from out of town, the logical place for her to go is the hotel room she's sharing with her husband, ya know. the very one the trio goes back to so Dave can fuck the narrator's wife. There's no other mention of her, so are we to believe all of this was happening while she was asleep in same bed while Dave was fucking another woman?
the cucks on here are idiots, this didn't happen.
She wouldn't need to drag hubby around she would leave his cuck ass at home.
just more cuckold crape
When is she goning to have to pay the piper?Sluts also age out. Soon she will be just so much gutter trash.
Hey how about making fell like a man and bring a HOT 20 year old to satisfy! Not some worn out slut that any old dick can get off on.
I happen to like hot wife stories, so 5
Great, fun story. I know that it's a fantasy, obviously some here don't. They also haven't read Literotica's description of Loving Wives, but whatever. I'd love for this to happen in my life. As you wrote it, I could picture it. Nice job. Thank you. I can't wait for the sequel.
1*
Just another piece of shit story polluting the loving wives category.
Good Story!
Ignore the nay-sayers and keep writing!
What's with the constant supply of cuckie stories?
How many of you scum bags exist out there? What a waste. Another non-erotic story thrown into loving wives. What's so erotic about wanting to watch your wife fuck another? Way to many of these stories on here already. Come up with something different. Oh, anybody that doesn't like this crap is labeled as a troll or told to be ignored. How fucking original a come back. Go fuck yourself.
Minority Comment
I like it. I'm pretty hetero but nowhere near homophobic. The naughtiness of activities like this is compelling. I don't like "staying between the lines" or other mandates to conform to societal norms. Too predictable. Too repetitious. Vive le difference!
Good debut
Not a bad little tale for a first submission. I would recommend fleshing out your characters a little more. We know nothing about Dave in this story. He's just a random, faceless, prop. We know nothing about the wife's feelings about being shared, and in fact, she seems to show very little hesitation for throwing herself into this strange situation.
One more critique is that you tend to include too much detail in your descriptions of the actions. When the main character gets up to go to the bathroom, do we need to know that he waited in line, took a piss, washed his hands and dried them with a paper towel? Try to spend more time on emotions and less time on actions.
I liked it.
The writing was hot, especially the spit roast. Nice work.
Excellent. Ignore the haters.
They're just sad little fucks that want to spoil a good site. 4*
Some basic, cave man, psychology
seekeras, below misses the point when he says this kind of story is a deviation from the most basic biological imperative to reproduce. In fact, it fits perfectly with basic biology, not just to reproduce, but in claiming a woman as your own.
In the good old cave man days, we men would have regularly been fighting it out to win and hold onto our women, with our testosterone flowing freely. These days, with social norms underpinning marriage, we don't have to work anything like so hard, and the testosterone, no longer needed, no longer drives our sex lives as strongly.
By putting another guy into the mix, we re-ignite that cave man drive. There is no clearer way of confirming that your wife is still desired by other guys, or that she is herself sexually open to other men, and needs you to work to keep her, than letting another guy have his way with her.
That puts the onus back on you to fight to hold on to her. The testosterone flows, and you give her the kind of fucking that reclaims her as your own, just as the guy does in the story. Not just straight away, but every time you think about it, every time you picture him fucking her, every time she reminds you of it, and every time you think about or plan to let another guy have his way with her, and make you work to win her back again.
Of course it's risky, but it is true cave man sex, and only a guy confident enough to know that he will keep his wife more satisfied that the competition will want to play.
Nice story. Some good hints in the comments about improving the quality of the writing, but don't be discouraged.
no way
my wife is not a slut as in this tale and I do not share. another chuck tale.
Always a sad perversion . . .
Poor couple. Hope they can stay together once they realize the emptiness of their relationship, and how they used each other so selfishly. Who enjoys reading about such shallow people?
i like it
Have done the same stuff with my wife. You dont know how good it is to see your wife enjoy herself like that untill you try it
Tell us more about you two
What do you two look like, tit size, cock size. Is she petite or tall and big boned? You as well? Hair color. You leave it at she wanting another stranger, will you write more?
Good story
I liked the device of having two business associates sit down with the wife. It was a more believable way of introducing a single man when the female associate left. I don't think the wife would have been receptive it a single man had sat down with her without her husband.
Good Tab A into Slot B descriptions of sex. It might have been a little more personal for the reader if there was some dialog. It was hot, but a little detached. Dialog would be a good way of satisfying another commenter who wanted to know what the people looked like. The dialog could show the reader by how the wife and the man reacted to one another verbally.
Good story, well written.
The wife...
What made this story go down was: The wife was letting the other man put his hand in her without the approval of her husband while he went to the restroom, and then when the husband agree with that she "looked completely shocked at the idea"? 1*
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