Lovely! Esp the parts as jenny are awecum ;)
good story with a nice twist. would have been better with some proofreading. hopefully chapter 2 will be better.
Loved the bi cross dressing ad the incest 1 of the best hope there is another chapter of this to good for just 1
Loved your writing and I hope to see more! Wonderful story!!
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lovely read
Lovely! Esp the parts as jenny are awecum ;)
good story
good story with a nice twist. would have been better with some proofreading. hopefully chapter 2 will be better.
bi is good
Loved the bi cross dressing ad the incest 1 of the best hope there is another chapter of this to good for just 1
Fantastic story!!
Loved your writing and I hope to see more! Wonderful story!!
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