All Comments on 'Jessica's Calling'

by KS0311

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
good

I really liked it, hope to see a chapter about Rachel soon ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
I hope for more chapters

I really liked it. I hope you come up with more chapters sooner than later.

KS0311KS0311over 9 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the support!

This was my first submission, so I'm glad people seem to like it. I have an idea of what to do for a follow-up, so depending on how much people seem to want it I'll make some time when I can and get it sorted.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
one of the best mc stories on the site, great job

Nothing more to say. Well written, interesting and sexy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Please

Plesse write more!

nairdahnairdahover 9 years ago
Really good start

Keep up the good work and I cannot wait to read more chapters!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Awsome story

Really Loved it, Looking forward to more of your stories

WalkingDeadFapperWalkingDeadFapperover 9 years ago
God damn!

Yo what song is it? Im gonna use that shit on my Teacher!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
A home-run for a first submission

If this is the quality I can expect from your first submission. I hope you can write more chapters or even come up with more stories in this section. I can't wait for your next masterwork.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Well written

That was definitely one of the better stories I've read.

Good work! I hope to see more stories from you. :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Need More

Please write more!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Interesting take...

I have read stories about hypnosis before, but very few from the standpoint of the one being hypnotized. This was very well done. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
More Please

This was awesome, I really enjoyed this story, it had both the fall and the turning of the protagonist. I would love to read more about how Michael advances his career by letting other partners and clients use Jessica. Then possibly another story after that one where there is a further decent into depravity ( protitution, porn actress, gangbangs, sex clubs ect.) as Michael becomes bored with his power over her and seeks an even bigger rush ego by further humiliating her

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Please Keep Writing

I am eager to see how Jessica's parents react when they learn their daughter has been turned into a mindless sex slave.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Any news on sequels?

Any news would be appreciated

KS0311KS0311over 8 years agoAuthor
More coming soon

Sorry for the absence. I've created an outline for the next chapter and have begun writing. I'm looking forward to getting it on here, so check back over the next couple of weeks. Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

I'm so happy to hear you're continuing this and soon! I can't wait!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Any news on Chapter 2?

KS0311,

i was wondering if you have anymore news on a release date for the next chapter. I believe I have read twice already that you would have something up in a couple of weeks. I'm a fan that is hoping you post a new set of chapters soon. However, if you have chosen to stop writing this story please inform those of use who have been waiting so as you not wait in vain.

Thank you for sharing your time and talent

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Update

I'm also curious for an update. Starting to lose hope… :/

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Question: how does the subjugation

of Jessica effect her ability to do her job?

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
more of this??

I hope you decide to eventually continue this story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
easy

If only it were that easy.

Where do I get the music file ?

GingerpiciGingerpiciover 3 years ago
Yes Master

Please train me

DoortotheDoortotheabout 3 years ago

Please give us more!

Iamcurious999Iamcurious999over 2 years ago

In an age of feminist lunacy and gender equality psychosis, it is so DELIGHTFUL to see the portrayal of happy, submissive, and beautiful "slave" women who exist to serve and obey men! Any man (and quite a few women) become tired of bitter, frigid, and miserable modern women with their "liberation" and "empowerment" nonsense inundating TV, social media, and schools and workplaces everywhere.

We need something better. A lot BETTER!

Five Stars!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Meh.

Guy with unstoppable power, turns girls into mindless sex dolls. Sounds like something written by a guy who just hit puberty. The sex scenes were mediocre, the plot was blander than mediocre, and the characterization was non-existent. 3/5

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

@Iamcurious999, are you living in the 18th century? wtf is actually wrong with you.. lack of a woman's touch?

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