it doesnt matter that it turned out ok in the end it was still sexual assault so I just skipped to the end since I don't like forced stories
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Anonymous11/14/14
IT A WAS A FINE PIECE OF STORY TELLING
I enjoy these wife walking the wild side story plots. Yours is a bit out of the norm but it was excellent. Any room to continue and expand on all characters?
I loved the story. The writing was electric. I also liked the reference to R.B. Ginsburg--that was hilarious. The "she went Gandhi" reference was also a nice, learned touch. All in all, this is a very amusing, hot story.
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Anonymous11/16/14
its fun
I just honestly don't get what Literotica wants when THIS is published and more, substantial works are "offered/posted" .. WTF literotica?
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Anonymous01/06/15
Again
This story deserves a sequel. Do the girls get together regularly or with other girls? Do the husbands get to participate without ruining either marriage? This was hot.
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it doesnt matter that it turned out ok in the end it was still sexual assault so I just skipped to the end since I don't like forced stories
IT A WAS A FINE PIECE OF STORY TELLING
I enjoy these wife walking the wild side story plots. Yours is a bit out of the norm but it was excellent. Any room to continue and expand on all characters?
Hot!
I loved the story. The writing was electric. I also liked the reference to R.B. Ginsburg--that was hilarious. The "she went Gandhi" reference was also a nice, learned touch. All in all, this is a very amusing, hot story.
its fun
I just honestly don't get what Literotica wants when THIS is published and more, substantial works are "offered/posted" .. WTF literotica?
Again
This story deserves a sequel. Do the girls get together regularly or with other girls? Do the husbands get to participate without ruining either marriage? This was hot.
Get rid of the husbands and you would have a very good story.
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