it doesnt matter that it turned out ok in the end it was still sexual assault so I just skipped to the end since I don't like forced stories
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Anonymous11/14/14
IT A WAS A FINE PIECE OF STORY TELLING
I enjoy these wife walking the wild side story plots. Yours is a bit out of the norm but it was excellent. Any room to continue and expand on all characters?
I loved the story. The writing was electric. I also liked the reference to R.B. Ginsburg--that was hilarious. The "she went Gandhi" reference was also a nice, learned touch. All in all, this is a very amusing, hot story.
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Anonymous11/16/14
its fun
I just honestly don't get what Literotica wants when THIS is published and more, substantial works are "offered/posted" .. WTF literotica?
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Anonymous01/06/15
Again
This story deserves a sequel. Do the girls get together regularly or with other girls? Do the husbands get to participate without ruining either marriage? This was hot.
Get rid of the husbands and you would have a very good story.
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Anonymous05/10/15
HUSBANDS ARE FINE
This was an excellent story. The "permission granted," comments by husbands was evidence for how many men feel toward their spouses. It leans toward an, "Owned and ruled," pattern of thinking even in these days long past Bra Burning parties.
May be a fun story to sequel, absent husbands and adding a cheer leader friend from college.
Had that conversation once, didn't got as well as this story did when the spouse found it that actually were gay. Loved the story and loved the writing.
she had to rape the other girl just to prove her point, no means no
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Anonymous07/05/16
Ambivalent
No should mean no - but this did turn me on. How about a sequel where the guys get what they deserve: the two girls discover they like lesbian love more and divorce their husbands and marry each other.
it doesnt matter that it turned out ok in the end it was still sexual assault so I just skipped to the end since I don't like forced stories
IT A WAS A FINE PIECE OF STORY TELLING
I enjoy these wife walking the wild side story plots. Yours is a bit out of the norm but it was excellent. Any room to continue and expand on all characters?
Hot!
I loved the story. The writing was electric. I also liked the reference to R.B. Ginsburg--that was hilarious. The "she went Gandhi" reference was also a nice, learned touch. All in all, this is a very amusing, hot story.
its fun
I just honestly don't get what Literotica wants when THIS is published and more, substantial works are "offered/posted" .. WTF literotica?
Again
This story deserves a sequel. Do the girls get together regularly or with other girls? Do the husbands get to participate without ruining either marriage? This was hot.
Get rid of the husbands and you would have a very good story.
HUSBANDS ARE FINE
This was an excellent story. The "permission granted," comments by husbands was evidence for how many men feel toward their spouses. It leans toward an, "Owned and ruled," pattern of thinking even in these days long past Bra Burning parties.
May be a fun story to sequel, absent husbands and adding a cheer leader friend from college.
Awesome lesbian story
I love reluctance stories and this site turned me on and got me off
Had that conversation once, didn't got as well as this story did when the spouse found it that actually were gay. Loved the story and loved the writing.
come on
she had to rape the other girl just to prove her point, no means no
Ambivalent
No should mean no - but this did turn me on. How about a sequel where the guys get what they deserve: the two girls discover they like lesbian love more and divorce their husbands and marry each other.
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