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It's a story "about my friend and *me.* You might want to look up something really basic like the object of a preposition.
I think you did a great job, especially for your first effort! Loved the dialogue, the sexual tension and character building - looking forward to more from you!
Good Read****
Thanks for sharing. Great first time effort. Looking forward to future submissions.
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