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Erotica???
Not sure I consider this story erotica.
Odd
The story is odd. There is clearly intended to be some ironic twist at the end, but frankly, it went right past me. The use of language is competent.
It is a wonderful twist (art or not)
And wonderful to read even if they did not fuck their brains out ;-))
It reminded me a bit of Biggle Jr. Not sure why. Maybe the boundless opennes.
ScattySue is still my favorite, but you are a close second :D
VvV
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