Double Trouble

I liked it, but it is too short and needs more character development.

Thank you, I will work on that as i keep writing

We Generally Use English

"Jeff and Anna was a married couple..."

Sorry, that's all I was prepared to endure.

I liked it too.

Yes I liked it too, but for the oposite reason. I love these little 1page fuckings.

You did a good job in both you storys, discribing the action. Hot & fast. I assume Anna got to com also. At least I hope she did.

Short and sweet

No pretensions. Just a simple stroker. The world can always use more of that.

It looks like you are just starting out writing these things. You will get noticeably better with each one. Enjoy the journey and hopefully we'll enjoy riding along with you.