I Bet You'll Like It

Very good story

Had me going tall the way. Can't wait for the next segment.

tbh

i came twice. thats not a very ladylike thing to say but its true. excellent writing. i think i liked it for relatability factor, actually. thanku :)

Perfect.

This story was just perfect! I hope that either there might be a part 2 to this with a bit more story, or that there will be a different, but just as epic story as this one. 10/5 best story I've read in awhile.

Very well written. I really enjoyed this story. More please.

Great story. Believable.
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Wonderful story

I found this very well written and it turned me on like no story has in a long time. I was wet and squishy and could't wait to get my dildo up my ass again. I hope you write another story, I would love to read it and cum again.

Amazing story

Incredibly well done. 5-stars all the way!
I've loved all your work, but this is the best by far.

I loved this buttslut yet romantic chick... Instant favourite! Makes me want to read more from you!

Awesome Anal!!

Prolific use of adjectives done right! Fantastic writer. I favorited the author and I'm hoping for more submission soon.

Wow...

Wow... Great job man I wish I had her as a roommate. Really good story and he came so much I applaud him.

VERY very good!

If not the best certainly one of the best anal stories I've ever read here.
Very likable characters, loved the dialogue, and technically correct for 1st-time or anytime booty pirating. I had a gf in college that said she 'came like a machine...'
when I was in her back door, with a remarkably similar name, so I could relate.

FANTASTIC! !!!!

I haven't come across a story lik this in such a long time. It's quite inspiring and deeply moving. I love how it all was written And how it all played out. Marvellous, simply marvellous!

Really good story.

I recommend this to people who want to read good stories

Best in a long time

This is by far one of the best stories I've read here in a long time.

Outstanding!

What a HOT SENSUAL SEXY description of an awesome ass fuck and love to go with it!!!

Great!

You NEED to do a sequel. This is the best anal story i have ever read!

Top story!

Having a wife named Judy who loves her ass played with, this was an easy relate. The story also took me back to 2 women I'd had "fun" with who also loved their asses fucked. The first one was someone I'd met up with for a planned hookup but I had no idea she was into the back door action until after we'd fucked the first time that night and after resting a few minutes told me, "You know what I'd really like? I'd like you to fuck my ass!" Wow, I was shocked, both at being asked to do this, having never been asked to do this before by anyone, and how fast I got hard again at the thought! We lubed up and I thought I'd died and gone to heaven when I found out how good her ass felt! The second lady was someone I'd been having a relationship with for a year when one night she told me basically the same thing as the first lady. "You know what I want? I want you to fuck my ass, now!" I asked her if she was sure, as my dick is pretty thick, and she turned around and knelt on the bed, asking, "Does this look like I'm sure?" Her ass was like a velvet clamp around me, totally unbelievable how great it felt to be inside her. It wasn't the last time either, wow! Great story, had me railed up the last 2 pages!

At least that Twilight movie was good for something right

Splendid anal fucking romance!

officially my favorite bc origins of 50 shades. I hope you meant it.

Yea.

MY GOD!!!!

Holy, butt-fucking, wall-banging YEAH,BABY!!! I think I tossed my tonsils....

Oh to be young.

Glad these kids are young. I would have died a long time ago. It would have been fun trying though.

Incredible Buttfucking Descriptions

The buildup was believable, the players became real people, and your telling of their first anal adventure was smokin' ! Thanks for the heat.... My subbie in Ohio would love this one.

great!

the story is great, I love how it developed - and very sexy anal descriptions!
I would have two comments:
- the 'I love you' and the exclusivity promise is a bit too much, especially in contrast to the raw slut and name-calling going on
- the voyerism piece towards the end is not consistent with above, and I am not sure it adds much.

New dictionary suggestions

in this story we've seen several new words that beg a definition:
Mmh
Mmgphh
Mmpphggrgh!
Of course, there are others but these 'm' words stick out :-)

mmmrgjhhhhhhh

I came 6 times up the ass. Just so you should know.

Weird wording

Story was great but I was constantly distracted by the onomonapoeias lul

That's the way it ought to be told...!

This was one of the most detailed stories I've read. And one of the most erotic.

The subject is one that I'd give a lot to explore but, after four wives...only one (by accident) gave me any anal. I'm still hoping. I ought to have my current wife read this one for 'lessons' and learning - but she wouldn't read it just because.

If a story could be 'plus-rated,' this one would get a 5+ from me.

WOW

A beautiful, loving, erotic adventure.

perhaps the best ever

so good on so many levels. loved the descriptions, loved the dialogue before it just dissolved into moans, loved the language and voice, loved the buildup, loved the story, loved the subject, loved the love, loved her, even loved him, loved it all. i see it's from '14 but hopefully you are still around. will have to look at you others.

mmmmmmmmm

What a hot story!

Love

Well written story, but I still don't get arse fucking when our maker provided us with a beautiful place to use for the cock.

Great hot story

Well written, hot action. Really got off on it. (more then once) Let's see if the rest of your stories are this good...

Thats the only way I would watch twilight also.

A great match and nicely told. Very erotic.

Surprised that she did not suck on his cock after and have him share the leaking semen and anal juice. That is what I would have done. As long as she used an enema before starting there is almost no health risk. In future he can administer the enema.