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Sun, Sand and My Cousin Abby Pt. 01

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by Cupcake_kandi11/15/14

Bad ending

She was supposed to put her mouth over it! How could let that nice thick load of cum go to waste. When our dad needs to empty his balls, either my sister or I are always ready to turn it into a cum swallowing blow job! What kind of a woman is she?

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by Averygoodlay11/15/14

Bit tame

Bit tame, but you got to start somewhere.
Cupcake: Can I be your daddy? Loved your picture.

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by Anonymous11/16/14

And then?

It ended just as it started to get interesting. One star.

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by Anonymous11/16/14

and after we got into bed...

Good God! I'm so revved up and you cut me off. Hurry and put up the next part. Really, you should have had them all ready before posting any. If you think it might be enjoyable it is not fair to the reader who finds it exciting. Like being worked up to go for a cum and being made to stop. In fact, exactly like that.

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by stevefun11/16/14

It's called Pt. 01 for a reason!

Thanks for reading. It is only part one, there is much more to come over the next few weeks...

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by dudeman0111/18/14

good start

Can't wait to read the next chapter....

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by Anonymous02/02/15

Best Read of the Night

I read this story as a bed time story to my girlfriend, and we were both pleasantly surprised. Can't wait for part 3!

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