Dom/sub Take Care of Each Other

A good first story!

Most enjoyable -- please keep writing. Welcome, thank you and please have four stars from me.

Nice story, more please.

Loved This Story

I really enjoyed your description of the sensual experience of the giving and receiving of a woman's milk. I thought the pacing was excellent and the story well crafted with so much tenderness and love. If you were to write a follow up I would love one where you took your Dom in your hand and milked him as you nursed him. Thank you so much for providing this erotic imagery

Talent Galore

Ravishing Rachel --- You are an exceptionally talented writer, with even greater potential! I know whereof I speak because I am a professional author, who also teaches Writing, Literature, and Film at the university level. Whatever happens, KEEP WRITING!! This story demands a sequel....

Don't write in present continuous tense.

Don't write in present continuous tense.

Great writing

You put me there .. It was your breasts deep in the back of my mouth. I could almost feel your warm milk spraying down my throat great writing
Suckleddry