Housewarming Party Ch. 02: No Return

Posted by "no brain."

idiot author.

Bad Read

I love cuck stories so I read this hoping it would be an improvement on your first story,
put the pen down or should I say shovel and stop digging yourself deeper into shit

What a self-centered, manipulative bitch

death would be to good for her.
sell her to the donkey show in mexico

1*

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excuse of a girlfriend

Any time a girlfriend is willing to humiliate you with a coworker and sleep with them in your bed, she should be thrown out or you leave. You don't ever humiliate a man in his work place. Then compound it with no protection, she will most likely be a disease carrier. Would be safer sleeping with a prostitute.

How can I put this?

Dapper, old son, you're a fairy. Face the fact.

I agreee

I like cuck stories I dont like this. Stories like this are humiliation not cuck stories. They are stories of someone who realizes a weakness in another person and exploits it for meaness.
Just let the guy go why put him through unneccessary pain, humiliation, possible loss of his job, reputation gone forever. He may even lose his life. Pathetic

Where is the love?

What a bitch

An open relationship or hot wife fantasy or whatever you wish to call it must be with the mutual consent of both persons. Both of them should gain something from it. The others are right --- this is just humiliation. Your male character should come to his senses and get back his life by getting rid of her.

id say

Fuck her if she would think she could fuck around and I couldn't. if she was going after strange cock id damn sure be fucking all the pussy I could even if at times I had to pay for it. And marriage I don't think so. At least not with her. Shes just a piece of ass till I find my life partner. And I guess I would just be another dick. But I think Id from now on keep my dick covered never know what she may bring home. Blow in her mouth But not in her pussy

Posted by an author

that knows how to hit all the delicious hotspots. Never mind all the sexless square saddoes - they shouldn't be in this category. 5*

Shitty, he should take a stand. When she does it again let her come home to him fucking someone and tell her this new that opened is great for him also. Do it to her a few times and ignore her see how she likes to sleep on the couch while he's in bed with a sexy woman. Some stories don't need major revenge but a little taste of yor own medicine stuff. She needs to taught a lesson , what's good for the goose is also good for the gander

She still is his girlfriend...

She still is his girlfriend...So no LW here...She can cheat and be a whore all the time while they are just dating...I just hope when the day to give the important step, he will laugh and tell her to marry one of her lovers...

re: anonymous-posted by an author

Another shit for brains who thinks his opinion is above reproach. Listen dickhead, stop reading the comments if they offend you so much. I read them before a story, so I can determine if the story is worth reading. Given my criteria of erotica, from the comments, this one is not worth reading. Assholes like you, however, always make it a point to show your ignorance and bias of others opinions. I got only three words for you. Go fuck yourself. I do hope you understand the meaning. Doubt it.

question for dapper D and really anonytroll...?

troll... calling other readers 'shit for brains' when by your own post you did not read the story? there are enough trolls dinging any story on this site that using the comments as your barometer for reading means you aren't reading, just posting critical antagonistic drivel.

Dapper... where is chapter 1?!
keep writing, this had some sparkle and promise.

Still crap.....

....he's a wuss and she's a whore.
Too many holes in the plot to work. She's not gonna tolerate him fucking around whiles she's constantly in the hunt?
No longer a relationship, but definitely something.
The best he could do now is disappear from her life and the apartment and find a new life elsewhere and with someone else.
Ha, that will be tough, because girls are hard to convince (well, most) and most guys don't really score that often. Girls willing and obvious can score every night....well, mostly.
But for a three year relationship to take this turn, and frankly if she's been this overbearing (assertive) all the time...maybe he deserves her.
But, damn! What self respecting man would tolerate that shit? None that I've ever known.
Burn and settle, or dump and run, man! Otherwise, there's no way out and you will surely drown in other men's cum.

Get out now

The guy's not married to her and shouldn't be. Maybe he needs to stay long enough to deal with the lease, but after that he should hit the road. In the meantime, he needs to find a new girlfriend. She can't have her cake and eat it, too. She made a unilateral decision and he should, too. I will reserve rating this story until I read the conclusion. I am generally a BTB guy, but I don't see the benefit of this guy hanging around. Even if she is offering him her ass, everybody else is getting it and they don't have to sit around waiting for her. Unless his thing is humiliation (and there are far too many characters like that on this site), he should find a way to either turn to tables or exit before she brings him home some STDs.

Break Genre?

It would be interesting to see if you could break the genre of cuckolding and have George have insight and realize that he does not want this to continue, and then write the resolution of what he does then.

re:RogueAllen

Listen up shit for brains. I've read enough stories and their comments to realize that the majority of the comments are usually correct in their assessment of a story. You're just another dickhead cuckie who thinks your opinion has more validity than anybody else. When you assholes stop commenting on others who have an opposing opinion that's when I'll stop commenting on you. Got it. Shit for Brains.

sparkle and promise?

Yikes, it smells like a turd, you really going to eat that?

Get His Balls Back!!!

What a original story!!!!!! Haven't seen anything like this before!!!!! Wow. Either give wimpy back his balls, or have the decency to cut him loose. She could never afford to live in that apt they just leased without him, unless she starts playing for pay. He leaves her to her on her own and starts a life without her. That's the only way it will work. Of course he has to start with getting his balls back.

castration

cut the guy's ball and dick off and cut him a pussie.

why do they always write these masssive over the top situations?

They pile on the absurdities until it's impossible to even see the story as anything other than farce.
I could possibly believe that the girlfriend got drunk and slept with his co worker.
i could even possibly believe he has a rational conversation that doesn't involve the phrase "get out of my fucking apartment, and take your fuckbuddy and all your shit with you".
I might even believe, he got off on it.
What I can't believe is that she let him fuck her again, since why would she? the dude is 100% pussy.....

Disapointing

The problem with this story is one a lot of cuckold stories have. The male says little to nothing. Only 'GoodHusband' seems to be able to write dialog where the boyfriend/husband can articulate why he still values the relationship. Of course his characters usually care about one another. Elena clearly cares nothing for George. Still is is mildly interesting. Hopefully George will tell us why he sticks around, if only because his name is on that lease!

you left the "i" out of your name

it should be "diaper" because you need to be change like the normal bitch ass cuckold. your story sucked. -1

Written like a child with no real life experience...

sad and pathetic

Disturbing . . .

That some people enjoy reading, and writing, about the antics of the mentally ill. Sickness like this is not enjoyable from any sane perspective.

Elena's statement at the end of this chapter

is intriguing. How will they adjust to the new Elena? Probably not in an interesting way, but we can hope.

Poor cuckold, he missed out.

His hot girlfriend is hooked on long thick cock. Cuckold missed out on his creampies to eat and clean up. Cleaning up the young stud lovers cocks as well. Having to clean both ass and pussy. I am sure he noticed her pussy was loose. Loose and slippery from all the cum shot in it. Soon cuckold will not be felt by girlfriend, nor his cock feeling much but warm fresh slippery sperm in her stretched pussy. More please

EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Great story!!!

slut wives

Really enjoy where she is going with her new found freedom. Not afraid to stand up and admit that she wants more. Personaly i think strong women not afraid to say what they want is a huge turn on. Love your reads, look forward to the next one!!

Outright arsewipe

Oh good grief

what a load of crap. Sick beyond words and George? I trowe he was a gelding or a mare. He certainly isn't a man.

What a bad news...

What a bad news she gave him: ""I'll always come home to you, hun..."...So now he has to throw her out when she decides to marry an honest woman...

It worked for me!

Call it weird, perverted, sick or sad, whatever..... it was hot, this girl Elena is extremely hot and this got me so worked up. Bring on more: more of her teasing, her whispers of sin as her husband learns more about her while they fuck...

A1. Thanks.

Terrible

Oh look another poorly written and very creepy cuckold story, like we don't already have enough of these.