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All in agreement...
3*, just because all was done in agreement with her husband...But it's sad that just with two years of marriage they needed other men to satisfy their libido!!! The story was just an account of what happened, nothing of interest...ahhhh maybe the guiness record of 8 times in a row...
Such a good wife:)
Oh yeah baby, wish I could crawl between your legs for seconds after you getting creamed twice. Your husband is a very lucky man.
makes me laugh at annony assholes who write about every one of these stories
it's their comments that make me laugh!!! You guys must be women haters, bet you're gay and that's an insult to the gays!!
1*
Also today we get a new baboon
Not a bad read. I would have liked more vivid and well thought descriptions, but not bad at all.
I think this would be a better if used as...
an introduction. OK, we have a slut wife with permission. Fine, whatever. But, I think this story would be better if the sex with stranger-stunt-cock guy was portrayed more realistically. A fun diversion, but her thoughts are more focused on her hubby back home. May be she is thinking about the ways she can embelish the story for hubby's fantasy fulfillment, and it gets presented in her thoughts as embelishment-vs.-reality in how the encounter actually goes. Of course, the written story CAN'T be over until she returns home, and tells her husband about the adventure. And the bulk of the erotic content is her reclaimation sex with hubby. Despite embelishing on details with stunt-cock to add to the excitement, she can sincerely contrast the actual sex with hubby as better and more fullfilling than any sex she has with others. Better still, if she can competently show hubby that it IS true with more than words. She is genuinely grateful for the open marriage, but her assurances to her husband that he is still the best equiped to ring her chimes, would help to make this more of a true loving wife story. She can tell hubby how toy-boy wanted her ass, but she turned him down, knowing her ass is exclusively for hubby. In fact she NEEDS to be punished for being such a slutty bad girl. Dsplaying hubby's mastery over her helps to explain how this kind of open marriage agreement can work, and gives the reader faith that she isn't just a vapid selfish shell of a woman, but instead more of a sexually enlightened creature who knows just how lucky she is to have found the right kind of open minded guy to appreciate her fully. The sexiest part of this story should be her showing her love and appreciation for her husband. Focusing totally on the extra-marital sex with the stranger, places this more as an erotic encounters story, than a loving wife one. Meanwhile, is a marriage of only two years REALLY strong enough to support open marriage, JUST because he was happy to marry a slut? Show us more about the marriage, and how and why it works, and then maybe these stories would be better recieved. As it stands now, the pessimistic audience here will believe that she will go crazy for extra cock at every opportunity, to the EXPENSE of her marriage, and it will suffer, as she gives more of herself to her lovers than to her husband. She will take him for granted, and the marriage will fail, and heartache will ensue. Just because THEY, as a couple, haven't fully thought out all of the potential consequences to come in the future, doesn't mean that they will avoid the same pitfalls that EVERY couple experiences when one partner gets more out of sex on the side than they do from within the core relationship.
Just saying.....
how about stupid.
Has this ever happened to any of you little jack off boys? No and it never will, sane people don't do this shit.
Hot story
It was a little too brief, but I enjoyed it, regardless. Not bad at all for a first effort, and I look forward to reading more from you. Next time, slow down a little and include a little more detail.
We will probably never really know how many ladies and gentlemen who read this wish they had such great
fucking life. I for one would REALLY enjoy both of us being able to enjoy the stimulation of the experiences and the sharing of those awesome cums and pleasures !
Nice Story!
This story actually seemed authentically the collaboration of a wife and husband. It was believable and straightforward.
Congratulations on your newfound sexual expression!
comment on comment
I've got to say the anon commentor with the comment title "I think this would have been better," came up with some very cogent points and his or her comments were almost as fun as reading the story that engendered them. Nice!
No Offence
Look, write what you want, but there is nothing, repeat nothing, about this story that could appeal to an adult. Adolescents, yes, but not adults.
Twentyseven is achieving his aim
of pissin everyone off. What are you doing in this category gayboy? Just another moronic troll soon to be banned.
Very sexy and naughty hotwife story. Thanks for writing 4*
Sweet and to the point
Nice fast read, I enjoyed the setup of where your husband wanted you to fuck other guys. Excellent action, keep the stories coming.
Nice debut
Hope to read more of your stories, liked the insights you gave into the wife's thoughts.
re: anonymous- I think........
Shouldn't you be writing your own story? As to this story, read the first couple of sentences. Stopped. Read some of the comments. Stopped. Read "swingerjoe's" comment. Stopped. That made me move on. Stopped. No more comment.
My wife is also a slut
Loved this story about another woman that is similar to my wife. She loves to fuck old boy friends. My best times are watching her fuck!
my cup of tea
short but very good . . the story is realistic too.
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