The storytelling is wonderful and I was completely drawn into the tale. Gwen & Tim are very special to me and it's great to see them explore together. Thanks for a great chapter. Please keep them coming.
by
Anonymous11/18/14
Good is getting better.
What a wonderful life Tim and Gwen live. Must say I'm a little bit envious. When asking for a continuation of the story, I thought you couldn't continue with the very high standard of writing, but I was wrong. It's another masterpiece and I'm waiting for the next installment with greatest interest.
Pleased to see Tim getting more involved with Gwen's exploration. Did leave me wondering though... how come Tim knew where the nude beach was? Is he perhaps not quite the "steady Eddie" he has been painted heretofore?
On the one hand it would be fascinating to get some of Tim's back-story. On the other, it could spoil the tempo of the main story...
As ever, liking forward to the next instalment already.
This is yet another chapter in a great story. I love how the wife gradually expands her boundaries and how she is supported and not criticized by all the other people they encounter. The story is so believable I can picture it happening one step after another. The author has a knack for leading the story along just fast enough to make it believable a yet not lose the interest. Thanks for the great work and PLEASE keep the stories coming.
English
It just keeps getting better.
The storytelling is wonderful and I was completely drawn into the tale. Gwen & Tim are very special to me and it's great to see them explore together. Thanks for a great chapter. Please keep them coming.
Good is getting better.
What a wonderful life Tim and Gwen live. Must say I'm a little bit envious. When asking for a continuation of the story, I thought you couldn't continue with the very high standard of writing, but I was wrong. It's another masterpiece and I'm waiting for the next installment with greatest interest.
Holtarn
Excellent as always
Pleased to see Tim getting more involved with Gwen's exploration. Did leave me wondering though... how come Tim knew where the nude beach was? Is he perhaps not quite the "steady Eddie" he has been painted heretofore?
On the one hand it would be fascinating to get some of Tim's back-story. On the other, it could spoil the tempo of the main story...
As ever, liking forward to the next instalment already.
A class act
I'm so happy to see this story continue to develop. Thank you for your time and effort.
Keep going
Really enjoying the progression and story. Thanks for keeping it slow and believable. Looking forward to accidental exposure at home!!
Good Stories
This is yet another chapter in a great story. I love how the wife gradually expands her boundaries and how she is supported and not criticized by all the other people they encounter. The story is so believable I can picture it happening one step after another. The author has a knack for leading the story along just fast enough to make it believable a yet not lose the interest. Thanks for the great work and PLEASE keep the stories coming.
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to A New Way of Seeing Things Pt. 02 Ch. 02 or
More submissions by BusyBadger.