Just the Six of Us Ch. 29

ANOTHER 5 STAR CHAPTER

YESSS!!! Please don't wait so long to post Chapter 30.

^__^

It's great to have a new chapter of this story after so long. Obviously, I'm looking forward to read how the story concludes, but I've enjoyed this chapter immensely. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the awesome work. ^__^

Hooray

So glad this is back, I let out too loud a cheer and had to minimize the window since someone came in lol.

So so happy that that fucker is dead.

Incredibly sad yet understandable that there's a "to be concluded"

Awesome

What else can one say about one of the best series ever on the site? You had me sad at Dannica's potential demise, relieved that it wasn't so, and a sense of justice satisfied that Red was dead. Fantastic job. And the Voice is incredible. It's a great story without him, but he puts it over the top. He constantly cracks me up. I hate the series is ending, but understand you were going to do it sometime. Hopefully we will get a few more chapters before you close the curtain. And hopefully again, when you do, you give us the privelege of a new story. Tremendous job mentalcase!

5 Totally Outstanding and Awesome STARS....

At first you had me worried on how the last chapter ended. Than it dawned on me that this would've been the perfect opportunity everybody feelings to come out in the open. However never would I imagined the way that you not only did but pulled it off. To have him talk to Emily to get an unbiased opinion on the situation even though it appears that Emily still wants to fuck him and hopes for a relationship with Mike.

To have Mike be totally honest with the girls and tell them about the voice in his head and when it all started. To really tell them all of them how he feels about each and everyone of them and the reason he handle (albeit wrong) the situation. Now that each sisters understand him better and how he truly feels for each of them. The ending was quite the eye opener and though Sarah up to that point had been the aggressor we've found that possibly Emma is the only one who likes to be dominated, which will need to be explored.

As for the death of that evil fuck, I only have thing to say. Good Riddance. Looking forward to chapter 30. Keep up your great work Mentalcase.

Booyaah!!!

You're back. AWESOME

Thank you

Best story on the site, no other story can compete

Amazing!

Not sure why I expected this chapter to not live up to the suspenseful hype that has built up over the months. It did live up to and beyond that mentioned hype. I think the level at which I am emotionally invested in your characters shows in how I, in my head, jumped and yelled for joy when Dani called Mike's name in the ER. You have done it again as you have proved for now 29 chapters that you can. Thank you for this and all the hard work that went into this. Sadly I realize that this means the slow wait begins toward the next chapter, but I think with you in the drivers seat it is a wait worth having. Thanks again for this work of great art.

great as usual !

Really upset thinking Danni might be gone. I was sick..Danni and Emma are the
most important to me...Great Job, now i need more..!

F I N A L L Y

the redheaded step child bastard gets whats coming to him!!!!!!!!!! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!!!!!

Thank you for not killing Danni. I was worried that you may be going there after the last chapter.

This is one of my favourite series here.

Automatic 5 stars for a favorite author.

Good humping fun.

Question

At the end, to be concluded...is that supposed to be to be continued....

Great Story!

I've always enjoyed this series from the very beginning and again you pulled me in with your characters and of course the story line. Thanks for your time and effort and as always I'll be looking forward the the next chapter.

Hey, hey

Nice to see your still breathing. I love this story. And the conclusion is coming is it? Great stuff man, I wish I could find more stories like this, I love stories that involve one brother and multiple sisters. They a bit hard to find however.

So what's this about Red being a stepchild?

Memories

Great chapter. Glad to rid of that crazy dude also. Poor Danni and Go Mike!

To be concluded!

I personally don't want this amazing story to end. If you feel that you want to end it on chapter 30 then I hope you actually give us, your fans, an actual ending to the story. PLEASE don't leave us with a cliff hanger.
This is one of the very best stories I've read on this site. I wish it would just keep going and going. I also hope the last chapter isn't as short as this one.
Anyways, good luck and happy writing. Your fan toby9790.

5 stars as always

Another fantastic chapter tho I'm very sad to see "to be concluded" as like many others, I hoped this story would go on forever :)

WOW !

I feel this is one of the best neverending stories I have ever read and LOVE it !
5******'s as usual .

Thanks again and keep going !

TX CRACKER

Take Your Time

I would like to see you knocking them up one or more at a time.Nothing like some babies to liven things up .Gave you five again I like a story with some bulk to it.Keep it up friend.

thank you

Hey buddy 5 stars as always you know you rock im gonna miss it when irs gone and yes please let him have kids with all his sisters

Love it

Man. HBO need 2 turn this into a show. I feel like I'm apart of the characters. I agree with everyone else. Let the sisters get pregnant, & allow more of the outside world n. Get them out the house some more. But I love this story & the fact that u cater 2 your readers. Turn this into a book & I'll buy it.

.......worth the wait!

Another good one...long wait...but great!!!!

Great chapter

It was nice to see a chapter that wasn't as long as some of the previous ones. Glad everything worked out well, though considering this is similar to a romance, I would hope a happy ending would be there. Can't wait to see how everything turns out. Good job.

Thank you

Thanks for another great chapter Mental! I am so very thankful you didn't kill off Danni - the amount of time and character growth she has gone through is a testament to your skill as a writer - I think she's awesome. Thanks also for fixing things with Sarah - she's my favorite. May you write a million more.

Good job.

I was about to say that this would be a unfinished story just like so many others. Good to see you are finishing the story.

Incredible

Just like always, your story is amazing! I can't wait to see the next chapter. I know you're gonna have to end this story someday, but now that everything is okay with all of his sisters, it could be nice to have more than one chapter to see how things are gonna go for them. And don't listen to those guys about the pregnancy thing, I don't think it would really fit in all this, you can always mention it at the very end, like in an epilogue or something.
Anyway, just keep doing what you're doing and hope to read you soon!

Thank You

For writing this series, I'd give every chapter of it 10 stars if I could. I'll be sad to see it end, but I hope you continue writing, and look forward to your new stories.

This is fantastic story and a great ride, with many highs and a few lows. Mike and his voice were great characters, with a deep and distinctive personality, all main characters were very good, and most of the supporting (excpet Ashley) were great too, specially Matt and Missy, very strong and again, distintictive. The premise was very interesting, Mike and his sisters, specially Mike, coming to accept that sexual atraction and making full enjoyment of it. I like it, Mike and his voice were strong enough to lead the story, it had great drama, very funny scenes, and obviously, very hot scenes.

My main problem on the characters part, was too much focus on Dani, for most of the story the other sisters felt like supporting cast, the worse being reveserved for Sarah, she had only one moment on the spotlight, and it was the beginning. Emma grew to get as much of a part as Dani, and I really like that. Beth, Beth is complicated. She came last, and almost all of her scenes were focused solely on sex, and duringsex she is very different from her usual self, who I think is slightly more interesting

But I do think it would be better to end here the story, for now or until you have a great idea that you must write. I feel that you were forced to add dramatic moments to keep the story interesting, and it's already feeling artificial. The accident was a bit forced, but the amnesia and "fake" amnesia parts more than make over it, but Danni's accident... It has a serious risk of becoming some soap opera like drama kingdom, methinks, if you force yourself to write without a clear goal. Waiting anxiously for more stories, and sorry for bad english, not native. Tiny suggestion? Older women, like 10ys difference. :)

the end?!!

Well I noticed that it said to be concluded instead of to be continued and that means the next chapter will be the last chapter but all good things have to come to an end.

None of this "to be concluded".....

This story must go on and on and on! This has been and will continue to be one of my favorite stories on this site! The voice in his head is awesome, no concluding of this story, it must go on!

I agree...

...none of this "to be concluded" bullshit! This story is perfectly capable of continuing indefinitely, with each new chapter having plenty to make it enjoyable. We still haven't seen a real Mike-voice vs. Beth-voice matchup, for instance, with both of them just letting their voices control the action and going to town on each other until they've exhausted all their options and each other. Hell, that part alone could last for days, if you throw in some time for refractory periods and sleep. They'd probably need some gatorade and power bars stocked up, but a little preparation is a small price to pay for something like that.

See what I mean? This story could continue for a while yet without getting old at all.

Speachless

You truly are a genius.

Damn...

Im truly impressed with this story. It is easily in my top 3 on this site, or anywhere else for that matter. Yes im sad that you seem to be finishing JtSoU, but I think its best to do so. Congratulations on writing such an amazing story, and thanks for sharing it with us.

Sweet Tea... its a southern thing. Thanks for that. XD

My favorite story on this site.

Im sad to see that it is ending. I just want to say how amazing it has been and to thank you for putting so much time into this for your readers.

over already

This is my favorite story on this site and it's to bad it has to come to an end,however i do hope you continue writing you have a way with your story that captivates me to read on, in short great work and keep up the good work

huzzah to be concluded

Don't get me wrong it's a good series but it probably ran a bit too long already. Looking forward to the last one.

EXCELLENT!!

When I was a kid, we couldn't wait for the saturday matinee at the theatre for the latest episode of some Western series, for a dime.
This is far better. It's FREE.
Yea, there are a few grammatical, spelling and punctuation errors, but compared to some other writers on this site, it's great.
Those commenters who seem unable to get past their grade school english teacher mode, I would suggest go back to just viewing the pictures and perhaps the videos while you run off a batch by hand in the bathroom.
I have thoroughly enjoyed this story and look forward to many, many more chapters. The more, the better.
I have teared up many times and rolled out of my chair with my sides hurting from laughing more than I have in years from reading this story which I hope does not end for a long time.
This writer is a prize we should all appreciate.

So sad to see you go.

As they say, man. It is very, VERY sad to see you go. THERE ARE A LOT OF POSSIBILITIES HERE DUDE! Then again, I have been following you for a long, long time now. It's nice to say that it has not been for naught. Please, can you just say, 'til the next chapter!

seriously?

I almost had a tear in my eye after the first few paragraphs...this whole story is just TOO good to be a stroker lol

I've never found myself emotionally attached to the characters of an erotic fiction before...all the while, it's still VERY sexy and arousing overall. Been considering starting again from the top, just to refresh because I've been reading this story off and on for a few years now.

5 stars, all around.

NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I must say that I was pleasantly surprised by the beginning of the chapter, full of emotion (Wow ....!), and the end full of love, I anxiously awaiting the release of the next chapter.
TKX friendly.

My favorite series

Please do end this on a good note, like a happy ending not some real life bullshit that makes sense. This is fantasy remember? Give them what they all want and make them all happy with each other. Pleeease I beg you!!!

What is a very similar series to this?

I have to say that this is by far my favorite series that I have read, I would really like to find a series that is very similar to this one so when this one ends I will have something good to read. if somebody could tell me a series in the comments that would be very helpful. Thank you

Please Don't

Please don't end it yet.. You still have a lot of possiblilities when deciding where to take this.. I'm a firm believer that this could turn out to be the longest story on this site. Also the characters are fantastic.. Each character adds to the story with there different likes and dislikes. Please don't end it here, please keep going.. I have read the series over about 3 times because it's so good. Probably one of the best. Please keep putting till the next chapter at the end

Amazing read

Just amazing. So heart felt and emotional. Tears were definetly flowing in all the viewers as they read this. One of the best chapters yet. I love these stories and started just a couple of months ago. Keep writing, please keep writing these.

Top Notch

I only follow 3 stories on this site and your story is the one I check first nearly everyday. It is erotic, funny, and emotional, a killer combination. I would like to see this story go as long as possible. One way to keep it going would be to limit the number of Chapters per year to anywhere from 2 to 4 (yeah I know booo!!) to prevent writer's burnout and allow continued character and plot development.
For those looking for something similar with a good number of chapters to read, the author Contrasting has a story "the MILF list" broken down to Making(17 Ch), Sharing(5 Ch) and Extending(3 Ch and continuing).

just felt I needed to say that the voice during his attempted abstinece was the funniest shit I have read in a LONG time. Great stuff.

When the next one

Dude, really? hurry up and write the next chapter, have just spent 4 days straight reading the whole thing, awesome is all we can say......

Fuckin A!!

I've been following this story for awhile now and holy shit have you outdone yourself with this one. I will hate to see this story go.

Wow!!

I just read all the chapters in 3 days. Holy crap!! Sizzling!! Other than being hot as hell, this story is very will written. I hope you continue to write after this one is finished. Thank you for sharing with us!!!