Choices - The Aftermath

Do you really think people care after 12 years? Whats the point in posting this now? More like you just had to relive your sick fantasies.

Good Point

Nobody cares.

negative rating

I JUST DONT KNOW

Then or Now. TK U MLJ LV NV

Trash

You forgot the part where he tells her...thanks for explaining..but your lying ass will be getting the papers....can u say DIVORCE

You

You should learn that you should not write stories in which you talk about you. You is a word you should not use. The more you use you the more you annoy people.
Do not write in the second person.

this author has done quite well

for someone with the I.Q.of a turnip

Faggot sissy husband and a hateful CUNT wife

Pathetic shit story! and that's being nice!

Where the Hell were you?......

11 years have passed since you submitted the last story. That is ridiculous.

Better than part 1...but..

Better than part 1...but this chapeter doesn't excuse the lack of respect for him, she showed in part 1...She risked all her marriage of more than 30 years...She was lucky...

you should've stayed where you were

the day of the cuckold is over so go back home -1

I gave this 1 star.

When you're addressing the readers and saying "you" then you're telling us what we did and that irritates us because WE are readers, not participants. WE want to know what you and YOU'RE wife said and did, not talking to us as though we participated in your sordid plot.

Had he been addressing us in the third person, that's would be fine. But first person? Nigga please. I wouldn't know how to act like a woman if you gave me a script.

Weird

Why the hell would a wife do some of this stuff to their marriage, if she wants a gay boyfriend to pal ariund with then go get one. Do not manipulate a perfectly goid husband into doing weird shit. Kissing him with cum breath.... Absolutely not cool... Divorce!

Another dismal day for loving wives

Doesn't anybody post erotic stories anymore? This drivel belongs in non-erotic. Why all the sickening cuckold tales? Getting tiring of wading through tons of these shitty tales everyday. Why are you writing for a small minority of perverts and sickos? 1* for this "dreck".

re:concretic123

As far as I'm concerned, he can stay away for another 11 years. We got enough cuckold writers already in this category don't need more.

Why do authors write in this tense? Have they never read one of these type of stories before? I have never read a story where this tense is used that makes sense or even sounds remotely decent. Why?

Happily married for over 30 years and start this up, no way. Watching and reading porn is fantasy land same as watching an action movie where the guy takes on the whole army alone and wins. If a spouse did something like this out of nowhere the divorce papers would be done asap. So this story was hot but not not real to 99% of married couples

Sick

We need a new category for writers like you. It should be called SICK FUCK!!!
I'm getting tired of all this shit! Where have all the real writers gone?
This is all getting out of hand!!!! Know one has gotten a high rating with
this so why write it. You have a decent title to get us interested. Then we
Find this shit. I'm to pissed off to write anymore. Do us a favor. {GIVE UP WRITTING}

yikes.

This site has turned into fag city, i don't care that you are gay, i just don't want to read about your sick fantasy.

re:NadinePoo

You sweet thing you. You know you love to read the negative comments. You read them. You get mad. You vent your frustrations at the reader. You know what? Who gives a fuck what your theories are. You're so wrong sweetheart. I think the majority of readers vent their frustrations at stories that are non-erotic, sick, perverted and not worth reading. We come on this site to read erotica not shit like this. Why are you here darling? To bitch at others or to get off. Let us know, maybe we can help you. Now be a good little pussy and mind your own business. Everybody has the right to voice an opinion as long as the author allows it. If he doesn't like the comments he does have the option of deleting them and leave only the glowing praises, but the score is what tells the difference. Doesn't it?

Well??

O.K. this story fills in the blanks of the very first story (choices). But what about (Encounters)? Theres a lot more missing in that story than the first one. So is there going to be an aftermath chpt 2? This doesn't even begin to explain her actions in Encounters. That was way over the top.

Wish

A ZERO was available as a score because this is SHIT! Wait a little while for your next story, how about waiting and entire fucking lifetime you sick fag.

It takes you 12 years to write the sequel

and this is the best you can come up with? When are you guys going to learn about 2nd person? This was terrible. I would suggest learning to write before attempting anything else.

What complete garbage

EroticaReader2002 have you ever had a woman? I read this crap, and seriously doubt it. You're a middle aged pathetic loser who has only fucked his own fist in the last 10 years aren't you? Get a hobby, do something.

The explanation......

.....doesn't make it any better.
It makes it worse. He's an immature boob and she's just given herself to a sex act with a man outside her marriage. She said she was angry, then she explains she planned it, "because she loves him so much"?????
Well, if that isn't the most twisted expression of love there is, I don't know the meaning of the word.

THIS IS NOT CHOICES

it is him learning acceptance. TK U MLJ LV NV

I made two mistakes

First, I read the sorry saga that this was supposed to follow
Second, hoping this would be an improvement, I read this.

To prevent a third such error, I will NOT read anything else by this author.

Maybe just a few more years?

Give it another 12, hell, make it 15 or 20, then try again. Or maybe just quit while you're a head.

I hate willing cuckolds and those that tolerate them.

"I love you , too, my dear husband" after she had sucked another man's dick a few hours before (and he knew it). I, too, will not be reading any more crap by this author.

Obvious!

The fact that the husband is willing to be duped and used like the stranger she gave a blowjob. The husband is such a wimp he is afraid to share his fantasies with his wife until she forces him to face the reality. Man of these stories have some appeal like a train about to crash. She goes off with a stranger but wait if she planned him being late and agreeable to a cuckold situation why wouldn't she plan to meet her lover Paul? Would a respectable mother of two and middle class woman just leave to chance meeting the right guy to suck his dick? She read his cuckold stories and then decided to test run him in a cuckold situation. If he had reacted badly to her and Paul she could leave with him and then confront him with his stories. She could still continue to be with Paul. Since he reacted the way she wanted now she can move him to the stage where he is pulling on his dick while her lover is fucking her. In fact, she can say that she got his phone number during this encounter and she is comfortable with him. I have no problem with the cuckold lifestyle but the deceit and self delusion by the husband is sick. I assume that you are going to rewrite your previous story "The Encounter." I just hope that there is more honesty and less bullshit between these two people.

PUKE !!!

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way off the mark

Men have no desire to wear panties unless transgender or split personality with homosexual lifestyle. This man is not. Big difference in a perverse mindset if he has passions to see his wife with another man. Clearly he does not. That is why you wrote that his mind and gut were twisted while seeing his wife with another man. The allowance for her to begin cheating served no benefit or purpose for him. The point here should have been, married this long is there room for swinging? Clearly not, perhaps the best antidote for a sparkles marriage is divorce and live as friends with benefits.